No one seems to hear your hidden cries

ville_valo · V.I.P Data inscrierii: 03/Noi/2006 Mesaje: 419

Aceasta este cea de a dpua pov pe care o scriu, cu Bill Smile

Deci...

Bill- a young guy, age 17, in front of his rock band. He's a very sensitive person but at the same time very strong.. at one point...
Evelyne- a beautiful girl, age 17, with a hard past. She will meet Bill in a very unexpectedly situation...
Tom- Bill's twin brother. the one who makes all the people laugh.
Georg- the bassist of the bend and a very good friend of Bill
Gustav -the drummer of the band, friend with all of them.

cele care vor aparea le voi prezenta pe parcurs Smile

i hope you'll enjoy it:)
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Alinutza · Administrator Data inscrierii: 29/Oct/2006 Mesaje: 490

welll....interesante pesonaje......sper ca aja va fi si fic-ul....ast first part :innocent:

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ville_valo · V.I.P Data inscrierii: 03/Noi/2006 Mesaje: 419

maine pun prima parte ca nu mai am timp akm :-(

Promit ca maine pun :-D

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juli@_in_love_wiv_th · Rette mich Data inscrierii: 30/Oct/2006 Mesaje: 156

abia astept sa pui prm parte [-o< :-D

ville_valo · V.I.P Data inscrierii: 03/Noi/2006 Mesaje: 419

well.. here is the first part of my story... i'm nervous.. I hope you'll like it :unsure:

Bill, a young guy age 17 , his twin brother Tom and their 2 best friends formed a band, and the name of it they decided to be Tokio Hotel. Together with Tom at guitar, Georg at bass and gustav at drums Bill,the vocal,wanted to go out of Germany, to do something with their rebel lifes.
Bill… that charismatic and rebel guy with a very particular androgyny look and with a very skinny body was a provocation for all the young people who loved the rock music. He was the image of the band, a beautiful and sensitive guy.
This young guy, with a so dark look, without any beliefs in God… will you be able to resist against his diabolical empire?

-I-
“ I was really alone…”

Bill entered his room, taking off his Tshirt and throwing it away. Tom and the guys were with him too.
B: Ahhh.. said Bill laying on the bed, completely exausted. And tomorrow we’ll have our last concert of this gig…
Ge: Yes… it will be very special…
T: I’m so tired.. I hope I won’t do something wrong… I would repeat some riffs now but I’m too tired.. I can’t.
B: Ohh come on, Tom!! Are you afraid of doing something wrong?YOU?Don’t make me laugh! You’re a genius. Shut up! Said Bill laughing.
Ge: We all have to be as rested as we can.
B: I think I’m going to sleep guys.
T: Well.. yes.. let’s go to sleep guys…
Slowly the guys went to their flats. Bill and Tom were living in the same flat, of course. Tom went to his room and Bill slowly fell asleep exactly how he laid down . Because he didn’t have the strength to change his clothes anymore.
On the next day at 9.pm, Tokio Hotel were at the place where they would performed their last concert. Outside was gloomy, but not night, because it was on summer. But in germany ir was a bit cold when it was getting dark. The air was cool and the wind was blowing slowly. The stage was in opened air. It was looking so dark.. the lights were dark blue, the satge was negru and the logo pf the band was up holded behind the drums. From the top(ceiling) of the stage were hung 2 big curtains made by a very finely black veil. The wind was blowing slowly making them look so mysterious…
At 10 pm Bill entered the stage looking like he wasn’t giving a f**k instead of his emotions which were deep stuck in his heart. He was all dressed in black. His skin was so white and his big eyes eyelinered in black were making him look so gothish..
B: Ohh… HALLO!!!! Are you ready to fly away together ,Koln?
The public screamed at unison “ YES!!”
B: He he he , he smiled with his diabolical laugh. Well… this song is called “ Hilf mir fliegen”… . He started the song with a short introduction made by himself. He was saying all in a whispered voice, giving at that place a so freaky feeling, but beautiful. Listening to him was making you forgeot of all around you. All that mattered was him and nothing else… He was saying….
B:Perhaps passing through the gates of death is like passing quietly through the gate in a pasture fence. On the other side, you keep walking, without the need to look back. No shock, no drama,I think no crying, just the lifting of a plank or two in a simple wooden gate in a clearing. Neither pain, nor floods of light, nor great voices... just a neverending silence. You're walking through the darkness of dying lights, crossing black rivers deep and dark .It is not all of life to live, nor yet all of death to die. I think that the last to be overcome is death, and the knowledge of life is the knowledge of death… Komm und hilf mir fliegen …Leih mir deine Flügel …Ich tausch sie gegen die Welt …Gegen alles, was mich halt.
He was singing with a grave and deep voice.
The concert had last 1 hour and a half.
At the end…
B: Ohhh thanks…. Said Bill while in the background Tom , Georg and gustav were playing a solo.
Bull went to the backstage and after some minutes the guys went too, ending the concert in a special way.
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are..you're the one who cries when
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Alinutza · Administrator Data inscrierii: 29/Oct/2006 Mesaje: 490

uhmmm.....No Comment!....next please :-D

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steffi_me · Trimis: 31/01/2007 17:02 Titlul subiectului:

k lomea,mai pune
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Si ingerii mai cad din zbor! Eu vreau sa ma prabusesc,pentru ca atunci as stii k cineva m-a considerat ingerul lui si l-as cauta

juli@_in_love_wiv_th · Rette mich Data inscrierii: 30/Oct/2006 Mesaje: 156

dapz please pune nextulik [please [-o<[-o<

ville_valo · V.I.P Data inscrierii: 03/Noi/2006 Mesaje: 419

B: Wow.. it was beyond words… really… said Bill laughing happily but tired too.
T: yeah… oh god… awesome!!! At the end , when you left the stage te public got histerrically!! Now.. let’s go to celebrate our awesome gig!!!!
They all said ‘ yes!!”
B: Ohh.. no.. I’m too tired for this.. no…
T: Come on Bill!!! Come with us…
B: f**k Tom, I’m tired… no… you go… I’ll go home…
They all went outside together, Bill to go home and the guys wanted to celebrate their success together but I wasn’t the same without Bill… Actually it was 1.30 am. and it was a beautiful night. Outside on the street were some fans waiting for them. But a few ones only , because all the fans waited in front of the stage before the concert and they had their autographs from the guys yet. This street wasn’t populated almost ever. Bill needed to stop and gave some autographs and then the fans(almost only girls) slowly fade away. A bit far away from the group was a beautiful girl, all dressed in black , very skinny.. a beautiful girl.. with white skin and big green eyes.
The guys said goodbye to the fans and went away. The street was very large and dark, without many lights. The girl was laying against a tree, looking like she was thinking at something. She wanted to walk away slowly. It was obvious that she wasn’t feeling well at all. She walked some distance. The guys were behind her but at some distance. But they didn’t notice her very much and were still walking. Bill looked at her and saw she was walking to slow and she was holding a bit her head in her right hand. Then she laid down with the hands on her belly.

B: What’s happening?? He said worried the guys.
T: I don’t know…
B: She’s not ok! , he said running to her.
B: Are you ok? He asked her putting his hand on her back.
She was feeling bad, she was crying a bit because of the pain and still with the hand on her belly.
B: Oh god… someone, please call the ambulance! Tom call the ambulance!
Tom faster called the ambulance .
- ayy oh god…. She said
Bill took her slowly from the waist trying to rise her up.
B:Oh god.. sweetheart.. try to stay calm.. we called the ambulance.. it’s coming… try to breath deep . What’s happening with you? He asked worried.
When he saw her face he realized how beautiful she was.
B: What’s your name?
- Evelyne.. ahh…. She said cryind in pain.
B: I hold you.. put your hand on my waist
E: Ayy she said nodding her waist. I can’t stay anymore.. oh god…
Bill took her into his arms raising her up and the ambulance was already coming. Some doctors came there, to help Bill with the girl. He was still holding her in his arms.
A doctor: Wht’s happening with her? He asked to know what they needed to do for emergency.
B: I don’t know.. I was walking and I saw her
Doc: Come to the car. Can you hold her?
B: Yeah , sure.
Bill went to the ambulance’s car with evelyne in his arms and put her in the car carefully. She was crying because of the pain and nobody was knowing what was happening with her.
Doc: Let’s go fast to the hospital!
Bill looked at her with pain in his eyes seeing her suffering so much.
B: can I go with her? He asked the doctor
Doc: Ok. Come in, beside her if you have a place. Is it ok
B: Yesh, sure. Guys! I go with her. I’ll call you later , ok? Bye
T: Ok. Don’t worry.. good luck
B: Thanks, he said with a sad voice.
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zw3et.me4Tom · Trimis: 01/02/2007 00:14 Titlul subiectului:

hey...i like it...:D:D...mai pune...dar nu te grabi cu nextul...noi mai putem astepta...sper sa iei exmenul... :-)

sunt sigura k o sa-l iei pt k eshti desteapta... :-D

...so...next cand poti...
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Darkness...Blood...Death...!!...Die...!!Die u mother fucker..!!I SAID:DIE!!!...Silence..Ooops!I have ur fuckin'blood on my finger...Damn,I thought I've put my gloves on...Don't be hatin'...My toxic mind really likes u...Don't worry..Death means pain...Pain means pleasure...Pleasure means happiness...So,if u wanna be happy u must fuckin' DIE!!
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ville_valo · V.I.P Data inscrierii: 03/Noi/2006 Mesaje: 419

ahh thenk you sweethearts. kiss you. Yeah.. I hope to pass it... :unsure:

dar sa nu fac aici off topic :D
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ville_valo · V.I.P Data inscrierii: 03/Noi/2006 Mesaje: 419

Deci.. Bill is looking like this with this sweet face
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Bill entered the car too and they went to the hospital. Into the car , Bill was sitting beside Evelyne.
B: How are you feeling? Asked Bill caressing her hand
E: Not good.. she cried
Doc: Keep breathing young lady, said the doctor trying to calm her down. And you…. Young boy… your name ?
B: Bill Kaulitz.
D: Mister Kaulitz, are you her boyfriend or… something of her?
B: No. I just saw her feeling bad and I just got scared seeing her like that. I didn’t know her before.
D: Oh.. I see there are good men too…
Bill smiled.
Arriving to the hospital, the doctors helped her getting out from the car and they entered the hospital, together with Bill too.
D: Mister Kaulitz, please stay with her 2 minutes while I go to see which room for urgent cases is free, said the doctor faster.
B: Of course.
The doctor went faster to check out the list of free rooms.
B: Come here… to sit sown.. I help you…
They sat down to wait for the doctor. The hall was empty at that point in time. It was late . She rose her hand from her belly and saw her hand stained with blood and got very scared.
E: Bill… no… ah noo… she was crying and trembling.
Bill got scared without knowing what to do.
B: What??! Are you hurted? Oh god… n..
E: No! I’m not hurted!
B: But.. what is happening with you? Evelyne… A doctor please!!!! Quickly!!! Evelyne.. calm down… please… he said really scared. But.. but… why…
E: .. I’m pregnant she said crying very scred
Bill realized it was gravely
B: Oh my god… A doctor please!!!
D: What happened? Room 22 please! What happened?
B: Doctor, she’s pregnant! And she’s bleeding!
The doctor looked at Bill as he knew what would happen..
D: Room 22 please. Said the doctor with a resigned sad voice. No.. Mister Kaulitz, you can’t go there. It’s private. We’ll check her. You can’t go in.
B: I’ll wait here….
He was so scared.. he didn’t see anything like this before. He didn’t know what to do in such a situation, he was feeling bad for that young girl… so young .. and pregnant? And loosing her beby….
D: Where is your fiancee, miss? Your boyfriend…
E: I don’t have fiancée, I don’t have a boyfriend and I don’t want to talk about this! Ahhh.. she was crying because of the pain
Bill saw the doctors taking her slowly and enetering to the room. After a couple of hours the doctor went out of the room and let her with the nurse for some minutes.
B: Doctor.. what happened? Is she ok?
D: Well… she lost the baby. She was pregnant in 2 months.
B: No… he put his hand on his mouth.But why happened this?
D: we made all the necessary analyses and it happened because of a falling or because someone beated her.
B: What?? He said completely terrified. How could someone beat a a woman??And a pregnant woman?? No…Why??
D: Calm down mister Kaulitz.. I know.. well.. I go to her. She’s ok now. I think she’ll go home. There’s nothing left to do now. He said with a sad voice. But.. no… better you go. Maybe she’ll feel better if you go there. She’s feeling very alone here, surrounded only by doctors. She’s alone.
B: Of course … I go .. But.. she knows that she lost the baby?
D: Yes. Our debt is to tell the tryth to our patients.
B: I go to her…
D: Ok , mister Kaulitz. And thak you. You’re such a good boy.
Bill walked slowly to the room where Evelyne was.He entered abit shy . He didn’t know what he would say to her. She was sitting on the edge of the bed with her head on her hands. Bill went close to her and caressed tender her head.
B: Evelyne…
She rose her head looking at him. Tears were flowing from her eyes.
B: Evelyne… don’t cry… I don’t know how am I dearing to say this …. But… you’re very young.. you have to be strong, you know?
E: Ayy.. embrace me, please… she said crying.
Bill felt like his heart was one step away to be broken seeing her like that.He embraced her toght, and she put her arms around his neck.
E: I don’t know even why am I crying!! I don’t know!! Maybe because nothing good is happening to me…
B: Evelyne.. why are you saying this? Said Bill now looking at her
E: I didn’t want this baby! Althought I know he’s not guilty of anything!
B: Why… wh…
E: This because the man with who I’m living… my boyfriend.. well.. he’s not my boyfriend now… since a long time for me, but I don’t know how to make him understand!! I’m sorry for saying this! But I didn’t want this baby!! She said still crying
B: Eve… sweetness… calm down.. It’s ok now… he said feeling so weak in front of the situation..
E: I know what you’re thinking now.. “ poor this girl…. What happened to her to act like this?” but I can’t , I can’t love and want a baby wanted only by HIM! If you understand what I’m saying
B: No! I don’t think this. I think why have you spend your life with that man? Why didn’t you ask for help?
E: You don’t know him… look! I lost HIS baby! He beated me hard and I couldn’t take it nymore and I went outside not to come back anymore. I don’t even want to know what will happen.. he will kill me for loosing his baby… this will happen…
B: But.. is he living with you?
E: Yes. I’m living alone, my parents are out for work. They are living in Finland. It’s been a long time since I’m trying to explain him that I don’t want him to live with me, that I’m not her fiancée!!! I swear I doon’t know what to do…. I’m desperate.
B: No.. no.. You’re not alone. I’m here with you and I won’t let you alone. Trust in me. He said embracing her.
E: I don’t even know what is your name…
B: Sorry.. I’m Bill Kaulitz
E: Thank you, Bill. I don’t know whay are you loosing your time with..
B: I’m not loosing my time!
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are..you're the one who cries when
you're alone..". I'm here for you & I love you Ville
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zw3et.me4Tom · Trimis: 06/02/2007 02:39 Titlul subiectului:

thast's so sweet....and sad... :'-(

oh my god she lost her baby...?a baby..... :weep:

a little baby...like Ville when he was only a baby-boy.. :'-(

sad...but i love it!! :-D

next bitte...:D...poor girl... :weep:

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Darkness...Blood...Death...!!...Die...!!Die u mother fucker..!!I SAID:DIE!!!...Silence..Ooops!I have ur fuckin'blood on my finger...Damn,I thought I've put my gloves on...Don't be hatin'...My toxic mind really likes u...Don't worry..Death means pain...Pain means pleasure...Pleasure means happiness...So,if u wanna be happy u must fuckin' DIE!!
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ville_valo · V.I.P Data inscrierii: 03/Noi/2006 Mesaje: 419

I'm glad that you like it. I'll post the next part I hope that today... :-D

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ville_valo · V.I.P Data inscrierii: 03/Noi/2006 Mesaje: 419

scuze ca nu am mai pus, kiar nu am avut timp..so ...uitatzi cont :-)

B:Evelyne , listen to me , please.. you won’t go there. I won’t leave do this.
E: I don’t have where to go! No . please, Bill.. don’t anything. Steve could kill you and I know what I say. Please. Leave me manage this by myself.
B: Evelyne.. please… what you have told me is very hard! How and why do you want to go there with that beast??
E: It’s my house, Bill! I have to
B: You don’t have why to tolerate this anymore! Please..
E: No Bill.. really. I have no choice.. she said rising up from the bed but on the next second she lost her sterenght.
B: Evelyne! He said a bit loud and catching her in her falling down. Evelyne, you can’t do any effort now. Look at you. You’re strenghtless. Wait a minute… please…
E: Bill… it’s very hard for me, stop it. Really. I know that better I wouldn’t go but I don’t have what to do, So please… go.. leave me alone.
B: I just cannot leave you like this, Eve…
He was sweet and worried about her. He was looking at her with his beautiful big eyes. She was a beautiful girl.
The doctor entered in to give Evelyne the liste with the meds she needed to take.
D: Here you have the meds, lady. Now, carefully go home and don’t make any effort, please.Ok? call for everything.
E: Ok. Thank you. Goodbye.
B: Thank you too, said Bill shaking hands with the doctor.
D: Welcome, mister Kaulitz.
Bill and Evelyne went out of the room and Bill was upholding her from the waist because she was a bit dizzy and strenghtless after all that had happened. They went out of the hospital. Outside the streets were deserted, it was late in the night, 3.20am.
B: Evelyne…
E: It’s ok, Bill. Don’t worry for me. I’m ok, she said but ahe was very scared to go home because of steve could really kill her because she didn’t stay at home that night, because she lost the baby… even if it was his fault, not hers.
B: Eve, please… come to my flat. You can’t go there…please… lookt at you… you’re trembling, you’re scared to death…, he said caressing her beautiful white check.
E: Of course I’m afraid, Bill…. He could kill me if he knows that I lost the baby! He will get mad… That’s why I’m afraid!
She was so helpless , there,in front of Bill.
B: Evelyne… I won’t let this happen! Please come with me.
Bill’s mobile rang and he answered rapidly, still looking at Evelyne.
B: yes.
T: What happened, guy? Whare are you? Are you both ok?
B: Yes. I’ll tell you when I come home.
T: Are you still with her?
B: Yes.
T: Ok, I don’t interrump you then… is she ok?
B: Almost… well we’ll talk at home. Bye.
T: Bye. Take care
B: You too
Bill look at Evelyne again
B: Evelyne..
E: But.. Bill.. what will I do tomorrow? It will be worst because I didn’t stay at home this night.
B: Evelyne, if it’s necessary you won’t go there until that s**t goes out of your house! We’ll talk to with the police and we’ll solve the problem.
E: Ok… I come with you.
B: Ok. He said kissing her on her forehead. Don’t worry now. It’s ok. Try to calm down. Nothing will happen to you now.
Evelyne sighed. She was holding his waist and buried her face at his chest while they were walking. Bill embraced her with a hand.
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ville_hermanni · Ich bin nicht ich Data inscrierii: 12/Noi/2006 Mesaje: 47

I love sad stories...They are so deep and express so many things...
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