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ville_valo
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deci.. am inceput sa scriu... cine vrea continuarea a ceea ce a citit la cealalta pov a mea... " This fortress of tears". Deci astept pareri.. cat mai multe... sapt asta m-am apucat sa scriu..si am deja o parte de pus.. cine vrea.. sa-mi zik  . 
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| Trimis: 23/11/2006 21:02 Titlul subiectului: |
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eu vreau, eu vreau, eu vreau, eu vreau, eu vreau...si knd il pooooi????  |
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ville_valo
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| Trimis: 23/11/2006 23:52 Titlul subiectului: |
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Part 2
After some hours, Bill went home too. Tom and the guys were already home.
It was 11 pm when Bill entered the house. He was looking completely wasted. Tired.. sad.. He was looking as je was lost without any clu. He waent to sat down on the couch in the living – room. There were the guys and Tom was just coming from the kitchen with a cup of coffe to drink ‘cause he was really tired . He saw Bill laying on the couch as he didn’t have the strength to walk anymore. Bill was staying on the couch with his bones on his knees, laying his head on his hands. He was crying quietly.
T: Bill.. please… I don’t know what to say…
Ge: I know thatyou’re sufferinga lot guy, and I don’t try to say anything because you won’t hear me.. I know… but try to be strenghtfull.. and I say this for you because I see how you’re looking and you are really strenghtless. Do you want to die?? Please.. try to eat or almost try to drink something!
B: No.
T: Bill, understand me that I won’t let you die! Please Bill… Now all this is too recent for you and for all of us too, but you’ll be ok. I’ll take care of you,.. as always. And I swear I won’t let you down. I know that you’ll never forget Melanie, but after a time, this pain in your heart will get pale as the life goes on, Bill.
Bill rose his head and looked at Tom.
B: Tom, said him between teeths, I never thought that this will happen to me.. it’s too much for me.. I’m not that strenghtfull.. you know I’m not..
Bill was crying, in silence, but it was more paintfull to see him like that, trying to keep his tears not to fall.
T: You’re not alone in this life, Bill! Although you think that you are. I ‘m here.. we’re here…
B: If I had just one more chance I would tell her how much I love her… I would do anything to see her smile again… to look into ger eyes and see her looking back… I can’t stand to know that she’s gone… I can’t!!!
T: Bill….
Bill embraced Tom, but almost falling into his arms.
B: I don’t know what to do.. I’m hollow… said him crying. I just want to sleep and wake up and see Melly beside me, waking me up with her beautiful smile calling me “ sweetheart”. And there is nothing but silence now around the one I love.. I would give my life for this not to be true.
Bill was still crying…quietly.. He didn’t know from where he head so many tears. Tom was caressing Bill on his head , still embracing him.
B: I just close my eyes and I see her smile.. Tom. I can’t take this.. I can’t!! all I want is to die.. gos I want to die… and bursted into tears .
Tears were falling from his eyes, his beautiful eyes.. an angel crying…
T: No! Bill1 please.. please try to be strong.. please..
B: I didn’t think those days will come so soon.. we just didn’t have the time to say goodbye.. all I want is to be death with her…
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| Trimis: 24/11/2006 15:56 Titlul subiectului: |
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bietu' d el..  si c sweet e tom k are grija d el..asa imi place cum povestesti!!! pooone next!! plssssssssssssssss |
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ville_valo
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| Trimis: 24/11/2006 19:20 Titlul subiectului: |
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akm trebuie sa mai scriu... va mai dura putzin... cred.. sper sa pun amine
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| Trimis: 24/11/2006 21:10 Titlul subiectului: |
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k k k k k k k k k...astept!!!  |
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ville_valo
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| Trimis: 24/11/2006 23:30 Titlul subiectului: |
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deci.. continuarea....
After 6 months….
They were in finland for another concert. They started the tour and they wanted to start with Finland. They needed to be on Tavastia club at 10.pm.
Bill was sad, watching something and nothing at the same time.
T: Bill, come on! We’re going on the stage and after us you’ll enter.Are you ok?
B:.. yes..I’m fine
Tom and the guys entered the stage and Tom started with a guitar solo. Then entered Georg and Gustav. They were performing “ Ich bin nich ich”
Bill was dressed completely in black. With black pants and a negru blouse and with a heavy make-up. He went on the stage with a melancholic and dark attitude.
B: soo… 6 6 6 go!
And started to sing.
B: Meine Augen schaun´ mich müde an und finden keinen Trost
Ich kann nicht mich nich´ mehr mit ansehn´ -bin ichlos…
The people was screaming and yelling but Bill wasn’t asa impressed as he would be an year ago. Actually his atitude was a bit more cold, he didn’t communicate with the public as well as he was doing before. His eyes were a bit cold, diabolikal.Bill changed. And when I say that he cjhanged it doesn’t mean that he changed in a bad way. His atitude was making the fans scream even more than before.
Bill started with “ Ich bin nich ich” because it was a very special song for him and which it was describing his feelings at that clipă of his life.
B: Ich bin nich´ ich, wenn du nich´ bei mir bist- bin ich allein, Und das was jetzt noch von mir übrig ist- will ich nich´ sein…
At the last chorus he was singing so loud and beautiful, so deep that Tom and the guys were looking at Bill so proud of him. Bill was singing and he was putting a aparte accent on some words, a deep tone…
B: Ich bin nich´ ich, wenn du nich´ bei mir BIST- bin ich ALLEINE( sang very long putting the accent on “I” sang very long like: alleiiine, and very slow)
While he was singing you could feel shivers down your spine.
After “Ich bin nich ich” started with “Durch den Monsun”. He took off his blouse while he was singing :” Das Fenster offnet…” and therew it away. He was looking so beautiful.. His waist was so thing, those pants were fitting him perfectly and he was lookin even more rebel barefooted.
He was singing so beautiful… and so on..they reached the end of the concert. Billw anted to end the concert with “Rescue me”. First of all because he had cjhanged a bit the guitar sound of the song. He told Tom to make this song more deep, more hard a bit, (with a strong guitar). The song was as slow as it was always but that grave guitar was giving completely another feeling at the song. It sounds gotic, black… dark. He started to sing He was singing so beautiful looking straighta head but almost at nothing. His atitude was so cold but at the same time much hot as usual. Whenhe head to sing the last chorus, practicaly the fans stopped screaming, only to hear him more.. They didn’t know that he had changed a bit the soung . The guitar wa samazing, and Tom was doing his best.
B: “Come and rescue me.. I’m burning CAN’T you see?” . that was amazig.. completely amazing.. he didn’t sing so grave before..…
When he ended the song he only said:
B: ohh.. thanks.. said him rising his left hand on his forehead
And he went out from the stage
Tom remained for a solo guitar ..amazing… with Georg and Gustav.
After they ended.. Tom threw his guitar on the floor and went down from the stage.
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just_me
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Data inscrierii: 30/Oct/2006
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| Trimis: 24/11/2006 23:49 Titlul subiectului: |
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pe cand sa pun un coment la întâia parte vad ca ai pus a 2-a parte  ....si m-am chinuit sa scriu o gramada  ...k imi place mie sa comentez 
so,in inițialul rand ma bucur ca ai facut continuare ...asa,pacat ca bil s-a schimbat...presupun ca acum e mai rece,mai nush....saracutul!e asa de sweet.acolo in prima parteai zis ceva de genu:''an angel crying''....aham...he is like a angel ... |
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ville_valo
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| Trimis: 25/11/2006 00:49 Titlul subiectului: |
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dap. Bill s-a skimbat mutl.. insa ca de pildă am zs.. nu inseamna ca s-a skimbat in rau... din contra..el s-a maturizat.. veti vedea
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Data inscrierii: 01/Noi/2006
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Localitate: ...in my lil emo world with my lil emo frends...
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| Trimis: 25/11/2006 00:55 Titlul subiectului: |
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damn girl imi place semnatura ta
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 Hug Me
 I`d f**k Ya Bill!!
I`m a pervert
Eu strig in noapte pentru tine
Nu ma lasa aici in intuneric
Nu sari!!!
Luminile nu te prind
Ele te vor ridica
Nu sari!!!
Iti vor aminti
De mine si de tine
Lumea de acolo jos nu conteaza
Te rog nu sari!!
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ville_valo
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| Trimis: 25/11/2006 01:11 Titlul subiectului: |
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H.I.M.- Circle of fear e melodia
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ville_hermanni
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Data inscrierii: 12/Noi/2006
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| Trimis: 25/11/2006 11:09 Titlul subiectului: |
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cum naiba de eu sunt singura care nu stia de continuare? si sunt sorsa..mdea..Are talentul sa puna din astea tragice... Ma rog, adik si eu scriu de mult o poveste, dar cu Ville, si tot trista e, dar...alt fel,nush sa explik akum.Dar bravo! imi place mai mult ca întâia parte, pare foarte interesanta, so..pune next, k altfel citesc eu in word unde scrii.
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ville_valo
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| Trimis: 25/11/2006 15:39 Titlul subiectului: |
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he he he 
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| Trimis: 25/11/2006 23:14 Titlul subiectului: |
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| ha ba..citesti si imi spui si mie!!!! glumeam.. |
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ville_hermanni
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| Trimis: 26/11/2006 03:37 Titlul subiectului: |
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nu pot sa citesc ca nu ma lasa asta.  Aaaa..adik sormea
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| Trimis: 26/11/2006 17:20 Titlul subiectului: |
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| ehh stiu...glumeam si io!!!! |
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just_me
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| Trimis: 29/11/2006 22:51 Titlul subiectului: |
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| mda....sa stii ca io inca astept continuarea...desi nu prea am timp de intrat pe aici... |
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ville_valo
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| Trimis: 29/11/2006 22:53 Titlul subiectului: |
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stiu.. insa am intrat in sesiune la facultate si nu mai apuc sa scriu :(( :((:((
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| Trimis: 01/12/2006 11:51 Titlul subiectului: |
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| aha k atunci...t intelegem!!! |
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zw3et.me4Tom
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| Trimis: 28/01/2007 03:48 Titlul subiectului: |
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oh my god ...am citit toata povestea ta in 2 zile. ...si prima parte si a doua. ..m-am culcat la 3 noaptea ...dar a meritat pentru ca te pricepi ...imi place extraordinar de mult... si am plans... ascultam evanescence si HIM... dumnezeule mare...nu ma mai puteam opri...imi place cum descrii relatia dintre bill si tom ....si cea dintre melly si bill a fost foarte emontionanta...ne-ai tinut cu sufletul la gura... ...si cand a injughiat-o maniacu'ala... a fost asa de trist... am vazut toate scenele...de parca as fi fost eu langa ei... nota 10 plus si felicitarile mele....fic super!! next please...descrii cu multe detalii si asta conteaza nespus de mult intr'o poveste...mai ales ca este in engleza...limba care din punctul meu de vedere se potriveste perfect cu povestea ta ...parca e si mai emotionanta. ..am scrs destul...:D...acum vrem next...PLEASE?
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| Trimis: 28/01/2007 12:35 Titlul subiectului: |
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aahh thank you sweetheart . vai m-ai imptesionat cat ai stat sa citesti.... danke schon. esti o dulce.
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| Trimis: 28/01/2007 12:47 Titlul subiectului: |
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 ...mi-a placut extrem mult si sunt o fire cam nerabdatoare si curioasa...  extraordinar de curioasa!!! si trebuia orucum sa exersez engleza pt scoala asa k... un nou mod foarte placut de a invatza engleza!sspre ex:nu stiam ce inseamna "to unzip"......aici am aflat... next pls pt k e cumplit de cool...si ma intreb ce o sa se mai intample.... ....esti deosebit de de treaba...   :D:D
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ville_valo
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| Trimis: 28/01/2007 17:26 Titlul subiectului: |
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pana sa ma apuk sa scriu... nici eu nu stiam anumite kestii. cum e si faza cu unzip:) aii am aflat pt ca am scris despre asta. si multe alte kestii. sunt la facultate in anul 1, la engleza-spaniola imi place ff mult sa scriu si am extrem de mare imaginatie.. si imi place sa scriu in engleza:). dar si in spaniola.. stii cate inveti asa? si pov asta pe care o scriu akm cu ville... etse diferita... dar imi place mai mult park. sau mi se pare pt ca am avansat, nu stiu
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| Trimis: 28/01/2007 18:59 Titlul subiectului: |
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hey ville valo ai revenit............ ...pune continuarea la fic.........
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ville_valo
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| Trimis: 28/01/2007 20:21 Titlul subiectului: |
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pai eu akm lucrez de cva timp la o alta pov.. cu ville . si nu am cum sa o pun aici 
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zw3et.me4Tom
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| Trimis: 05/02/2007 18:47 Titlul subiectului: |
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nu mai pui next...???o lashi numai p suri ta sa puna... ...tu ce faci...??vrem si la tine next... bitte... ...
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ville_valo
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pai am pus my story ..insa nu e continuarea asteia
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