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clar ca merita sa continui...m-am trezit si acum pot lasa un comentariu mai de doamne ajuta  ...
so....mark e doar un drogat ocazional?adik idea e ca ori sti incapator ori,dak ai continuat,atunci devii dependent  ...adik e cam complicat ca,dupa ce te droghezi de ceva vreme sa nu fii addicted ...ma rog,sau cel putin asa stiu io...
e misto ca i-ai bagat in fic,intr-o forma sau alta pe preferatii tai,din cate stiu,adik pe placebo si pe H.I.M...sunt si printre preferatii mei,impreuna cu nirvana  ...
so,vrem next...please!
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ville_valo
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asa este .. preferatii mei  Si da.. deci mark nu este un drogat din ala ajuns deja dependent... el se drogheaza pt ca se simte singur..pt ca il oboseste faptul ca treb sa faca fatza trupei sale de rock in care e... Si cand isi da seama ce era sa-i faca celui mai bun prieten al sau ii venea sa moara... nu se mai recunostea.. si Bill a dat dovada ca ink ii este prieten.. cu toate ca ati vazut ce era sa-i faca Mark.. 
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| vai vai... bietu' bill... un prieten adevarat!!! |
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ville_valo
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akm .. vreau sa va spun ca..  din pov mea.. care are 93 de pagini... mai sunt doar.. 10.... in care se vor intampla att de multe ... 
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deci... pov mea este pe sfarsit.... vreau sa vad parerile voastre... si akm si dupa ce veti citi sfarsitul... kiar e f important pt mine... ma gandesc serios sa fac si partea a doua.. insa.. nush.. voi vedea...
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| deci mie imi place f mult!!! e super tare, pkt k mai e putin, dar dak vrei oti face si partea 2 k noi o sa citim, stai flex...si io is sigura k o sami placa pt k u chiar le ai cu fan ficurile...p bune!!! |
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ville_valo
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asta inseamna f mult pt mine.. parerile voastre:) de asta am si dat la facultatea de lb straine:). Imi place enorm sa scriu si ma simt extrem cand munk imi este apreciata  Viel viel dank!!
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M: What happened? Asked her worried. What?
Tom looked at Melanie and Bill rose his head from Tom’s legs, weepimg his tears as fast as he could.
B: Nothing, sweetheart. Said him trying to show a smile
M: Bill… I know you… Tom, what happened? Please tell me….
Tom looked at Melanie confused without knowing what to say. Melanie went and sat down on the couch beside Bill. She was looking at Bill and caressed his hands. Bill tightened his teeths and shuddered because of the pain on his wrists. Melanie look quick at his wrists.
M: No.. what’s this , Bill..? asked her scared
B: No.. nothing. Said him with a sad and quiet voice.
M: Who done this to you, Bill?
T: Bill… you should tell her…
M; tell me what? Oh my god.. what? Asked her almost crying, caressing Bill’s wrists.
B: Sweety… well… oh my god.. it’s to hard to tell this to her… Said Bill looking at Tom
Tom looked at Bill
T: Bill…
B: Melly.. do you know Mark? Our best friend? Of mine and Tom’s?
M: yes.. a bit…
B: He has a problem with the drugs…. He’s taking drugs.. but he stopped now. He didn’t take them since a long period of time.But this night he does.. well.. I didn’t know it and I went to his home to talk a bit, because I didn’t see him for an year and he’s my best friend, you know? And.. after we watched on TV a PLACEBO concert…
Bill’s voice started to tremble
B: After that.. he turned off the TV. We were in his room watching the concert on TV.
Melanie caressed his check while he was talking
B: He… he put me against my will on the bed.. he was much strong than usual because of the drugs.. I don’t know… He was too strong for me… I tried to avoid him but I couldn’t.. After a while.. he tied my hands on the top of the bed with a scarf. He tied me very tight and because of this my rists are like this…
Bill was talking with Melanie but he was looking down. Melanie wasn’t able to say something, she was completely shocked.
B: .. and… and he forced me and he pushed down my jeans. I don’t know.. I was desperate.. I started to cry. I was talking to him but he was like he didn’t hear me. He didn’t realize what he was doing. He was drugged and also a bit drunk. The neighbours were out for vacation and no one could hear my screams. He tied me and scratched my belly. It was horrible
M: No.. no.. Said her crying isterically. No, Bill.. no!! she was desperate
B: No… sweetheart.. you’re breaking my heart.. please don’t cry.. Melly…love… Said him and tears came into his eyes
Tom went to Melanie and caressed her on her head
T: Melanie.. oh my god..
M: Bill.. no.. let me see your belly, said her crying hard and raising Bill’s Tshirt.
Bill didn’t want Melanie to see that. He knows that it would impressed her very much.
M: Oh my god.. no... Said her crying and putting her hand on her face. Then caressing so soft Bill’s belly. How could he done this to you? Why?? No.. I knew that something would happen... I don’t know.. I felt it.. and I told you, Bill.. I was afraid of something... afraid for you! Bill... my angel.. no... And.. and... oh my god... did he.. did he rape you? Please tell me...
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| mi-e mila d ea...c disperata e... |
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ville_valo
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dap... in tp ce am scris.. am ascultat.. dak mai tin bine minte de la Evanescence-lithium... deci intrati si acultati...in acelasi tp citind... nu va pot explica ce stare si cat de bine am putut sa scriu pe melod asta...
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kMAOGpcl69s
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ma termina cand zice: "darling I forgive you after all... everything is better ..not to be alone"
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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xQRGLHy5PRU
este within Temptation-is this our farewell
ascultati asta.... si cititi..cum sa nu am inspiratie pe asa o melodie... eu numai asa scriu.. cu muzik pe fundal...
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just_me
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ce dragutzi sunt bill si cu melanie ...ca tin asa de mult unul la altul ...si le pasa asa de mult unul de altul ...io cand am citit asta ascultam evanescence-my immortal si se potriveaste perfect ...
pacat ca mai e numai putin din poveste...nu-mi dau seama cand am citit 83 de pagini ...oricum,chiar vreau sa feci continuare, scrii extra misto...  ...
si mie imi place lithium&is this our farewell ...sunt super tari piesele...
am impresia k noi 2 ne-am intelege,k ascultam mai mult sau mai putin aceeasi muzik...dak vrei,adauga-ma in lista ta de mess...id-ul meu e georgette_ginger... |
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da.... our farewell.. espe melod mea pref de la Within temptation... ador rock-ul gotic.... si my immortal se potriv..ai dreptate....
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dap...imi place fic-ul tau...chiar e mortal...vreau next... 
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o sa pun continuarea in curand... tot sad va fi...
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B: He was just one step away to doi it.. . I was crying.. I don’t know.. I couldn’t not to cry.. I was so desperate...I was begging him to let me go and after some minutes he suddenly stopped. As he was starting to think clear. Said Bill trying to keep his tears not to fall on his cheecks.
M: Bill... Said her taking him into her arms. Oh my god... I would die if that guy would make you something, Bill! I swear...
B: Calm down now sweetheart... said him in a very sad and quiet voice. He was still shocked. I’m ok now... Don’t worry. Said him caressing her.
M: I know the fear you felt, baby... I know...
B: No.. princess.. don’t cry... You know because of that s**t who.. who succeded in raping you. If.. if I would have the chance I would kill him for hurting the most important person in my whole fucking life!
T: Don’t think at this now... please.. calm down , both of you. Go upstairs.. you need to sleep.. Bill please... Melanie...
M: Come.. Bill... She was helping him to rise up, because he was so tired and hurted... Come, love.. said her holding Bill behind his waist.
In their room, they changed their clothes and laid down to sleep. Bill wasn’t wearing a Tshirt because his scratches on his belly were very painfull.
After a while... at 3 am:
B: “ no.. please... n.. no...” he was saying in a quiet voice and still dreaming. “ don’t please... please...”
M: Bill.. you’re dreaming.. it’s just a dream.. wake up sweety...
She turned the light on. She was softly caressing him on his chest and his belly to wake him up.Bill was still dreaming and he was totally perspired. He was feeling her hand on his belly but he couldn’t wake up.
B: “ no.. please....don’t do this to me...No!!!!” he screamed and woke up.
M: Bill.. sweetheart.. you was dreaming, said Melanie holding him at her chest. It’s over now...
B: God... said him putting his head on his knees. He was tired,.. exausted.
Then they laid down trying to sleep again. Bill wrapped his hands around Melanie, getting close to her. She was feeling his breath and his heart beating fast.
B: Hold me, Melly.. hold me...
M: My little angel...
After a while they heard alittle noise at the door. Like somebody was trying to open it. Bill and Melanie rose up quickly. Melanie went to Bill and buried herself into his arms .
M: Oh, no.. what’s this? Please.. what’s this, Bill?? She was desperate.
Bill was holding her tight but he was afraid too. The door opened and 3 men enetered. Those men closed the door and went to Bill and Melanie.
M: No! oh, no! please.. Said her holding Bill tight. Her voice was trembling.
B: What the f**k are you doing? Said Bill to those men.
One of them who was looking strong, that type of guy with some muscles took Melanie violently from Bill’s arms.
M:.. no!! no please... Bill... help. No!
B: What the f**k are you doing??You s**t! Said him and went to that man to take Melanie but before he started to make any move the other man catched him from the hand. That man was the stronger one.. not with many muscles, but a strong man.
First man : First was this bitch, and because of her me and my frien we stood in jail for a while in jail. Now we managed to escape. Said him laughing. But now, both of you will pay for this.
Then he started to kiss Melanie.
M: No! no.. She was trying to avoid him but she was so fragile. She was struggling hard.
B: Let her alone!! No! Don’t even try to do something ‘cause I kill you!Melly.. no....
Then the man who was holding Bill started against his will to unzip his pants. He was too strong and Bill was to thin and without any strength against him.
B: What the f**k are you doing?? No! f**k! Get off!! Help! Please! Somebody fucking hear me!!
M: HELP! Please.. Now her voice was so law.. she was almost whispering. Help...! He tried to scream as loud as she could. Help! Tom... Tom!!!
Bill didn’t think at that... but he started to scream too to help Melanie who was without strength anymore.
B: Tom!! TOM! Help! Please....
Tom and the guys head him screaming and went fast to their room. Tom entered the room. When he saw what was happening he anfd Georg ran to help them. Tom helped Melanie and took off that man who was trying to undress her, and Georg helped Bill who was laying on the bed and that man untop him. Gustav called the police who came fast because they were searching for them since they escaped from jail. The police took them.
After the police left:
T: Melanie.. are you ok? Asked him helping her to rise up.
M: y .. yes.. I’m ok.. where’s Bill??
T: Bill is here.. he’s ok.
M: Bill... said her running into his arms.
T: But how did it happen?? How did they came here??
B: I don’t know... said Bill holding Melanie.
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poate va intrebati de ce i se intampla de atatea ori asta lui Bill.. asta a fost si este practic subiectul de seamă al pov... si are o mare importanta pana la sfarsit...
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saracu bill!deci chiar i se intampla asta de prea multe ori...si totusi ce are omul ala cu bill?adik presupun k nu i-a facut nimic  ...oricum,abia astept finalul  ! |
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| deci intr-un fel si io ast finalul..dar knd ma gandesc k apoi gata.. deci e fain ficu' sper s faci si partea 2.. knd pui next??? |
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Aici este next-ul...
After a couple of months...
In the evening, around 7.pm Melanie went outside because she needed to walk alone.
Bill and the guys were in the studio. When they came home, Bill saw a note upon the table: ” Bill, I went outside for a walk. I need to walk alone.. I’ll come soon. I went to walk through the cementery ‘cause you know that I love it. Don’t worry. I love you.”.
B: But… why? And she sad that she would came soon… and now it’s 9.30 pm… He was a bit worried… well.. not a bit actually. He was worried about that man and he was worried because she was “Bill’s girlfriend” and anybody knows her and was very dangerous for her to walk alone.
T: What happened?
B: look…
Tom read the note.
T: Hmm… stay calm guy. ..
But inside , tom was a bit worried too. They sat down in the living-room to talk. After an hour…
B: I can’t stay here anymore! Something had happened to her.I go out.
T:We’re coming with you. Bill, take your coat. It’s cloudy outside and it might rain.
They went outside, walking directly to that cementery, to find Melanie.
At the cementery , before Bill and the guys came:
Melanie was walking slowly, alone… thinking. That clipă she felt a hand touching her shoulder.She turned quickly and scared to see who was there. It was a man.
That man: Finally alone… said him smilling.
M: Oh, no!.. please… What do you want from me?? It’s not enough what you have done to me?! Said her almost crying. Is it not enough??
That man pulled out from his coat a knife. Melanie was completely sacred now. And she was so alone..
M: No.. no.. please.what did I do to you? What?? Said her crying desperately. Please leave me go..
That man: So.. you don’t know what you have done to me… Because of you I stood 3 months in jail!!
M: Because of me?? It was my fault? You raped me!
That man: And I would do it again, now. You know? But… now I’ll kill you. Sorry…
That man was drugged.. completely drugged and a bit drunk too.
M: No.. please… please… Don’t do this! You’ll end the rest of your life in jail!
That man: And I’ll do it because of your boyfriend.. That Bill.I hate him and this will make him die Said him laughing.
Bill and the guys were on the cementery. Bill saw Melanie from the distance and saw that man in front of her.
B: Melanie! Oh no.. Tom.. that man is there! No! and he started to run as fast as he could to her and he was running really fast.
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iar dupa fracțiune asta va veni ultima parte.... deci mai am o sg parte de pus
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| pfoai biata fata...si c pateste???? |
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| god...nu din nou!de fapt acum e si mai rau:vrea sa o omoare... ...well,ne tii in suspans rau de tot.... |
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ok... sa pun akm si ultima parte... stati putin...
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T: Bill!!!
When that man saw Bill coming so fast he smiled and and stabed her in her stomach.
That man: Now, she’s yours,.. BILL! Said him angry and laughing like he was crazy. Then he ran very fast out from there.
B: No!! no…!!!
Bill saw Melanie falling down on the ground saying in a law voice “ no..”. Bill ran to her and sat down on his knees and held her on his arms.
B: Melly! No.. No!! My Melly…. My love.. don’t please… noo…. Don’t leave me.. please… my princess please…
M: Bill.. sweetheart… my beautiful boy.. I love you and I’ll love you even if I’ll be on the oder side.. I’ll always love you, Bill.. my Bill. Said her caressing so sweet his cheeck wet because of his tears.
She was crying and her skin was white. Her eyes were eyelinered with black.
B: No Melly… please!! Tom, call the ambulance!!
Tom took his mobile and called the ambulance.
B: sweetheart.. please… promise me that you’ll never leave me.. I can’t live without you, princess!!I can’t please…
He was crying desperately holding her in his arms. Melanie was starting to lose her strength.
B: Melly… no.. please.. no.. why?? Melly… I love you… I love you ..please don’t leave me…
M: I love you too , Bill…
Bill kissed her. Her lips were cold and white.
B: Melly, don’t leave me.. please… remember that I said to you that we’ll always be together? Said him crying hard.
Tom was there and the guys too. Tom didn’t see Bill like that in his whole life. He put his hands on his mouth and started to cry quiety.. he was completely impressed by what he was seeing.
M: Bill… Don’t forget me please… I loved you since I saw your sweet eyes.. and I’ll love you no matter where I’ll be.
B: Melly… don’t do this to me… no.. please.. Don’t go and leave me.. my love… without you I’m nothing…
He was crying and breathing very fast.. tears were falling on his cheecks.. his tears were negru because of his black eyeliner. The scene was so impressionant..
B: Sweetheart.. please .. don’t leave me.. I won’t live without you!!I love you..
M: Ich liebe dich.. meine liebe..
And she closed her eyes for eternity.
B: No!! No! no Melly!! Please.. no!! He was crying hard holding her in his arms like he wanted to die with her.
T: Bill… said him caressing Bill on his head and crying too but trying to hide it . He needed to support Bill ,not to cry.
B: No.. she is the reason of my life!! My life started with her and without her it must surely ends!
Bill was crying and crying without stopping. He felt like he was completely dizzy. He wasn’t thinking anymore because of the pain in his heart.
B: Melly!!!! Melly… please don’t.. no..
T: Bill…
Bill just couldn’t realize that she was dead. Not her. Not the love of his life.Not then..not like that.. Tom embraced Bill tight and Bill wrapped his hands around Tom’s neck, crying with blood tears for his love.
B: Why?? Tom, why?? I won’t live without my princess..I can’t!!! said him crying so hard that he was shaking in his brother’s arms.
T: Bill.. This is beyond words..I.. I just don’t know what to say…
Tom was crying too. And he wasn’t as sensitive as Bill but even this he was crying too. That scene was really tragic.
B: Noo.. she can’t be dead!Not her! No.. please Tom.. tell me that she didn’t die…no..
Bill was holding Tom tight crying loud. His voice.. his crying.. were having a grave impact because of the silence of the deserted cementery.Bill lost his strength and slowly laid down on his knees, and Tom too, trying to hold Bill.They were on the ground, in their knees , beside Melanie. Then Bill laid his head down on his knees, with the hands on his face.
On the next day was the funeral..
Outside was cloudy and a bit gloomy. After Melanie was buried, Bill remained alone on the cementery, crying and walking slowly home.
It was 7 pm. It was getting a bit dark and the wind was blowing slowly.The cementery was completely deserted. No one was there anymore.
The fog was giving to the cementery a cold and a strange image. Bill was walking slowly home, crying quietly. The slowly wind was blowing his black beautiful long hair. He turned again his head only to look again at the funeral stone of his only love.
B:I have to be with you.. Even in death my love for you goes on.. I love you.. my princess…
Tears were falling on his cheecks.
Then he turned and walked slowly home…
The end
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just_me
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god,i hate povestile cu sad ending....acum si io is sad ...
.oricum,misto scrisa povestea si asteptam si noi continuarea... |
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andreeabranzan
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| omg!! c trist e girl... hai t rog io mult pune si bucată a doua knd o faci!!! plsssssssssssssssssss... |
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ville_valo
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v-a placut? ...
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Alinutza
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normal mai si intrebi.... 
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