Mesaje privateMesaje private   AutentificareAutentificare 

 
This fortress of tears...
Du-te la pagina 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6
 
Creaza un subiect nou   Acest subiect este inchis, nu se pot crea sau raspunde la mesaje    Pagina de start a forumului ToKiO-HoT3L-4Ev3R-RoCkS.MyForum.ro : ..:Fan Fiction:..
Subiectul anterior :: Subiectul urmator  
Autor Mesaj

andreeabranzan
Vizitator





MesajTrimis: 07/11/2006 21:37    Titlul subiectului: Raspunde cu citat (quote)

pai no barbatu' era homo, cred... :rofl:
Sus

andreeabranzan
Vizitator





MesajTrimis: 07/11/2006 21:55    Titlul subiectului: Raspunde cu citat (quote)

pfaoi mai, bietu' bill, io nus ce as face dak mas afla intr-o situatie d'asta
Sus

ville_valo
V.I.P
V.I.P


Data inscrierii: 03/Noi/2006
Mesaje: 419

MesajTrimis: 07/11/2006 22:30    Titlul subiectului: Raspunde cu citat (quote)

that man wanted to unzip(a desface fermoarul) his jeans. asta era
Sus
Vezi profilul utilizatorului Trimite mesaj privat

ville_valo
V.I.P
V.I.P


Data inscrierii: 03/Noi/2006
Mesaje: 419

MesajTrimis: 07/11/2006 23:10    Titlul subiectului: Raspunde cu citat (quote)

dak nu mai intelegeti cva , pls ask me Smile :-) nu e nici o probl. e important sa intelegeti tot Smile
Sus
Vezi profilul utilizatorului Trimite mesaj privat

ville_valo
V.I.P
V.I.P


Data inscrierii: 03/Noi/2006
Mesaje: 419

MesajTrimis: 07/11/2006 23:12    Titlul subiectului: Raspunde cu citat (quote)

They told all the story to Georg and Gustav when both of them entered the dressing room. They all went to the hotel. They stood long time together talking into twins’ room. When They entered the room , Bill took off his tshirt and laid down on the floor against the wall. He was trying to hide his sadness but his eyes were too sad to pretend that he was happy.
G: What, Bill?...
B: Ohhh gooood .. I can’t stand it anymore… I can’t stand to be far away from Melanie…. Said him laying his head on his knees. I love her and she’s far away…
On the next day, in the morning Bill went out for a walk. He was walking by the lake. It was getting dark. Suddenly he saw Melanie standing on the ground in front of the lake. He went to her.
B: oh my god.. said him in a quite voice…. Melanie…?
M: Bill? Said her rising up. What are you doing here, Bill? She was completely amazed but in her eyes were a light ad she couldn’t take it anymore and jumped into his arms. Bill held her tight and kissed her. He realized that she was still loving him.
B: Melly… why did you left me like this? Why? Asked her trying not to cry… even if his eyes were one step away to be filled by tears.
M: I couldn’t take it anymore, Bill Because I knew that I have to return to Finland… But it’s worst like this… I can’t stay far away from you… not anymore Bill….
B: “ You jump , I jump, right?”
M: “ Right..”
And then Bill kissed Melanie.
B: Melanie?
M: Yes.
B: mm.. your parents let you do what you want to do?
M: Bill… yes.. they let me… I’m 19 years old… The let me do what I want… almost all that I want. Even if that thing is not a crazyness.why?... Bill?
B: Would you like to come with me? To stay with me?
Melanie was completely amazed. She really was loving Bill, but she didn’t know if her parents would accept this situation.
M: Bill.. are you proposing me to come and live with you?
B: You’ll always be with me. I’ll take you with me on our tours. You’ll be anywhere with me , sweetheart…
M: I’m afraid Bill.. I don’t know…
B: Are you afraid? Why baby? Said him caresseing her cheek.
M: Because I don’t if my parents.. I don’t know if they would accept this…
B: But.. do you want to came with me?
M: Yes, Bill.
B: Look.. go home and told this to your parents. Stay calm , sweetheart. And then, please.. call me or came to my hotel. You know wich is.
M: Ok.. yes.. Bill.
B: Now, go home, said him kissing her
M: Bye.. Bill….
Bill went to the hotel.
B: Hallo guys. I need to tell you something.Tom , Georg , Gustav pay attention. Let’s sit down.
T: Oh my god, Bill.. when you talk like this.. you scare me….
Tom sat down next to Bill.
B: I proposed to Melanie to came and live with me… said Bill watching Tom, a bit worried about his reaction.
T: Oh my god…. Are you sure guy?
B: Yes.. I love her.
T: what can I say? Good luck brother… said Tom beating his brother’s knee.
Bill smiled. He was really happy because Tom understood him.
B: But… Now I need to wait because Melly went to speak with her parents about this….
T: And… what do you think? This is a big decision, you know?
B: I know it Tom.. I hope they’ll accept it….
Sus
Vezi profilul utilizatorului Trimite mesaj privat

Alinutza
Administrator
Administrator


Data inscrierii: 29/Oct/2006
Mesaje: 490

MesajTrimis: 08/11/2006 11:18    Titlul subiectului: Raspunde cu citat (quote)

yoy....da ce imi place...vreau next-ul si apropo esti baiat?
_________________
This fortress of tears...
Ne cerem scuze pentru Inactivitate.
Sus
Vezi profilul utilizatorului Trimite mesaj privat

ville_valo
V.I.P
V.I.P


Data inscrierii: 03/Noi/2006
Mesaje: 419

MesajTrimis: 08/11/2006 15:12    Titlul subiectului: Raspunde cu citat (quote)

nope:)) sunt Dana Smile) :lol: :lol:
Sus
Vezi profilul utilizatorului Trimite mesaj privat

andreeabranzan
Vizitator





MesajTrimis: 08/11/2006 15:58    Titlul subiectului: Raspunde cu citat (quote)

pai da' io inteleg, dar dupa ce ii desfacea pantalonii, c vrea sai mai faca?? :lol: , deci io inteleg mai...si e fain pune next
Sus

ville_valo
V.I.P
V.I.P


Data inscrierii: 03/Noi/2006
Mesaje: 419

MesajTrimis: 08/11/2006 17:18    Titlul subiectului: Raspunde cu citat (quote)

sa stiti k in pov asta nu vor fi faze... hm... ff explicite.. decat una.. dar mai spre sfarsit... adik va las imaginatia sa va raspunda la intrebare.. eu tot ce pot spune este poor Bill :'-(. Misterul asta mi se pare cel mai interesant... adik sa te tina cu inima in gat dar totusi sa nu se arate absolut totul.. si asta pt ca poate tu iti imaginezi sau vrei sa-ti imaginezi altfel ceea ce descriu eu si poate dak spun eu totul nu-ti convine cum l-am prezentat... este si asta unul dintre acele "detalii" ale scrierii unui .. roman sau.. poveste ;-)

Ultima modificare efectuata ville_valo la 08/11/2006 17:30, modificat de 2 ori in total
Sus
Vezi profilul utilizatorului Trimite mesaj privat

ville_valo
V.I.P
V.I.P


Data inscrierii: 03/Noi/2006
Mesaje: 419

MesajTrimis: 08/11/2006 17:25    Titlul subiectului: Raspunde cu citat (quote)

T: Somebody is knocking on the door, Bill. But it’s kinda late….
Bill went to open the door.
M: Bill… said Melanie and fell in his arms.
B: Melly! Sweetheart! Oh my god! Tom, hel me!! Tom , guys, help me, please!
T: What is happening, Bill?? Said hi running to him.
Bill took Melanie into his arms and put her on the bed.
B: Tom. Bring me some cold water!
Bill was standing on the edge of the bed holding her I his arms.. She was so beautiful… Her skin was so white.. with her dark make-up… She was cold. Bill kissed her check softly.
T: Take it Bill. Sai Tom bringing the water.
Bill wet his hand and then put it on Melanie’s check. She was fragil and thin, and her dark clothes were putting her skin even more white.
Bill looked at Tom Georg and Gustav.
B: I’m afraid…..said Bill and tears filled his beautiful eyes.
T: calm down Bill… She only fainted.. she’ll wake up soon. Calm down…
After 10 minutes Melanie woke up
M: Bill…
B: Sweetheart… how are you feeling?
Melanie rose up standing on the bed in front of Bill
M: Bill.. she caressed his cheeck.
B: You can’t come with me, isn’t it? Said Bill and his eyes were sad.. very sad..
M: My parents told me that it’s my life , that I’m an adult and that I can do what I want…. But… said her with a sad voice
B: What Melly? said Bill now smilling….
M: But.. they told me that you’re not the guy for me…. That I need to find a guy that like me not a rock star.. who’s always on tours.But if you’re the one that I love, what can I do Bill?? Said her crying.
Bill embraced her tight.
B: You don’t need to be afraid, sweetheart! You know that you’re all that I live for… . You’ll be with me always… always.. anywhere. I’ll take you with me on our tours.
M: Bill.. promise me that you’ll never leave me.. never Bill…
B:I promise you my angel.. I’ll always be with you. Said him smilling. Guys, you know me. Will I take care of my sweetheart?
Tom came and sat down next to Melanie and Bill. He put his hands one behind Melanie’s neck and the other behind Bill’s neck, smilling.
T: Melanie… Bill loves you. I’m sure that he will take care of you. He’s really sensitive. You’ll need to take care of him too… I know what I’m saying , said Tom smilling at Melanie.
B: Tom… don’t tell such a thing, please… said Bill blushing.
M: sweetheart… said her with a big smile
T: I ‘ve always take care of Bill. And I’m still taking care of him. He’s.. I don’t know… fragile… Not like me… Do you understand what I’m trying to say, isn’t it?
M: I knew it.. Tom… I don’t know… I saw it…
Tom rose up and Melanie passed and sat down on Bill’s legs.
M: My beautiful man…. Said her kissing him. Oh.. Bill… would you come with me to take my luggage?
B: Of course Melly.
M: Oh my god… but… But I’ll see what I’ll do..
B: What , sweety?
M: I don’t know where I’ll stay… but I’ll see what I’ll do. Don’t worry.
B: It’s not a problem, you’ll stay..
But Tom interrumped him
T: Melanie,don’t worry. I stay in the same room with Bill. But, now you’ll stay with him, and I’ll go to stay with the guys. Really, not problem. Said Tom smilling.
M: Tom, no.
T: melly, on tours we all stay in the same room very often. It’s not aproblem, believe me!
M:Will you be ok?
T: Of course!!
Tom packed his clothes, and went to stay with the guys.
T: Bye! See you soon.
B: Bye.. thanks brother…
T: You don’t have for what … stop it!!smiled Tom
M: bye, Tom. Thank you.
Sus
Vezi profilul utilizatorului Trimite mesaj privat

andreeabranzan
Vizitator





MesajTrimis: 08/11/2006 18:44    Titlul subiectului: Raspunde cu citat (quote)

vai c dragutz e tom... :wub: asa-i???
Sus

ville_valo
V.I.P
V.I.P


Data inscrierii: 03/Noi/2006
Mesaje: 419

MesajTrimis: 08/11/2006 18:51    Titlul subiectului: Raspunde cu citat (quote)

dap... veti vedea cum l-am prezentat pe Tom in pov asta... e adorabill si are o grija de Bill.. tot tp va fii langa el si-l va ajuta.. TOT TP :-(
Sus
Vezi profilul utilizatorului Trimite mesaj privat

Alinutza
Administrator
Administrator


Data inscrierii: 29/Oct/2006
Mesaje: 490

MesajTrimis: 08/11/2006 19:04    Titlul subiectului: Raspunde cu citat (quote)

deci fic-ul e super...vreau next-ul dar tu esti fata dana si ai 19 ani?sau te confund? :-/
_________________
This fortress of tears...
Ne cerem scuze pentru Inactivitate.
Sus
Vezi profilul utilizatorului Trimite mesaj privat

ville_valo
V.I.P
V.I.P


Data inscrierii: 03/Noi/2006
Mesaje: 419

MesajTrimis: 08/11/2006 19:14    Titlul subiectului: Raspunde cu citat (quote)

nu nu ma confunzi:). Sunt dana si am 19 ani Smile. dar mai vreau pareri... :'-( ce ziceti? cum vi se pare... dak o sa cititi toata pov... o sa vedeti niste intamplari... am muncit att de mult... dar va spun ca astea sunt identic gandurile mele, asa am avut eu in gand structurata pov de cand mi-a venit ideea sa scriu
Sus
Vezi profilul utilizatorului Trimite mesaj privat

Alinutza
Administrator
Administrator


Data inscrierii: 29/Oct/2006
Mesaje: 490

MesajTrimis: 08/11/2006 19:44    Titlul subiectului: Raspunde cu citat (quote)

pai eu urmaresc pov ta...si o voi urmari pana loa capat mi se pare extraordinar sa faci asa cv.... :weep: :w00t:
_________________
This fortress of tears...
Ne cerem scuze pentru Inactivitate.
Sus
Vezi profilul utilizatorului Trimite mesaj privat

Alinutza
Administrator
Administrator


Data inscrierii: 29/Oct/2006
Mesaje: 490

MesajTrimis: 08/11/2006 19:48    Titlul subiectului: Raspunde cu citat (quote)

dar vreau sa stiu id tau... :-) ..dak nu vrei sa afle ceilalti da un msg personal..astept msg si next-ul... ;-)
_________________
This fortress of tears...
Ne cerem scuze pentru Inactivitate.
Sus
Vezi profilul utilizatorului Trimite mesaj privat

just_me
Rette mich
Rette mich
just_me

Data inscrierii: 30/Oct/2006
Mesaje: 215

MesajTrimis: 08/11/2006 21:58    Titlul subiectului: Raspunde cu citat (quote)

am recuperat si eu si ador foc-ul asta :w00t: :w00t: ...e asa de misto povestit!ador stilul tau de a descrie sentimentele si,ink o chestie kre imi place e cum ai scris relatia dintre bill si tom...si de fapt si cu ceilaltai baieti....imi plac mie chestiile astea intre frati...
so,promit k nu mai ratez nimic,pe cat posibil...si...cred ca stii deja,vreau next :w00t: ...k is tare curioasa sa vad ce se va intampla...chiar tu ai zis k vin chestii misto in continuare...
Sus
Vezi profilul utilizatorului Trimite mesaj privat

ville_valo
V.I.P
V.I.P


Data inscrierii: 03/Noi/2006
Mesaje: 419

MesajTrimis: 08/11/2006 22:40    Titlul subiectului: Raspunde cu citat (quote)

M: What time is it , Bill?
M: It’s the middle of the night.. I called from your luggage. Look… actually it cames .
M: ohh.. how fast, said Melanie smilling. Ok.. I’ll go to change my clothes..
B: Ok, sweetheart. Me too. I’ll change my clothes here…
Melanie took from his luggage his clothes to change herself and went to the bathroom.. Bill took off his tshirt and put on his black pants. He was looking beautiful.. dark. When Melanie came out from the bathroom Bill kept looking at her with his gorgeous dark eyes. She was beautiful.. really beautiful. She was wearing a tight negru tshirt wich was painting out her thin and desăvârșit waist, and long black pants. Bill saw her belly tattoo.
B: Melly… do you have a tattoo? Asked Bill looking straight at her/ It’s gorgeous… oh my god….
M: Yes.. it’s the heartagram. The same tattoo as Ville’s, the singer of H.I.M. ..
B: .. Yes.. I know his tattoo… Oh my god, Melly… so beautiful… it’s exactly the same…. I love it.. said him laying down in front of her as she was standing up, and he touched her belly.
As she felt his hands running slowly on her belly, he felt shivers on her skin. Bill went to open the window. She stuck watching him.. His skin was so sensitive.. delicate… she was loving him.. he was perfect.. his hands were so thin… The moon light was enough and they turned off the light.
M: Bill.. sing to me…. Please….
B: Me? Oh… said Bill .. I…. ok sweetheart… said him smilling.
B:” Zum ersten mal alleine.. in unserem versteck… ich she noch unser namen an der wand…”
Bill went in front of Melanie and put his hand behind her waist, still singing.
B: “ komm und rette mich.. ich verbrenne innerlich….” .
Bill was looking beautiful….He was tall and thin, and his big eyes were eyelinered in black. His long black hair was laying on his shoulders. He was singing with a beautiful deep and grave voice. He was standing now in the middle of the room and Melanie in front of him. He was singing so beautiful.. was only his voice without any instrument…..but it sounds gorgeous. He was looking like a devil.
B: “ Komm und rette mich…. Ich liebe dich….”
She was hypnotized and he was smilling like he was applauded by 5000 people…
B: “ Won’t you die tonight for love?...”
M: Oh noo… said her with tears in her eyes… she was living the happiest moment of her life.
B: “ Baby join me in death….. we are so young, our lives have just begun, but alredy we are considering escape from this world…”
After that beautiful moment , they went to sleep. She buried herself into his arms.
On the morning, Bill and Melanie woke up because someone was knoking on the door.
B: What the f**k?? Said him completely dizzy running his hands through his hair and rose up to open the door. Oh no!! Tom! Why did you wake me up?? Said him sleepy.
T: Sorry.. and… uhh.. sorry Melanie.. but there are changes in our tour skedule.
B: What?!
T: We need to pack our clothes because we’re going to Romania. And we need to go at the airport at 9 pm. Hurry Bill! A. and.. another thing.. we’ll stay.. in Romania.. at Bran Castle. I think that’s a bit scarry… you know.. that Bran castle it Dracula’s home… uhh… Now I ‘ll go to pack my clothes. Bye!!
B: Bran castle? Said him thinking. I’v heard a lot of things about that castle. Dracula’s home….
M: I’m a bit afraid, you know?
B: Why, love? And he embraced her. We’ll stay in the same room. I won’t let you alone. Don’t be afraid, sweetheart. Said him smilling.
M: Oh! It’s late! Let’s make our luggage…
B: Oh, yes!
Sus
Vezi profilul utilizatorului Trimite mesaj privat

ville_valo
V.I.P
V.I.P


Data inscrierii: 03/Noi/2006
Mesaje: 419

MesajTrimis: 08/11/2006 22:48    Titlul subiectului: Raspunde cu citat (quote)

dap.. si mie imi place sa-i vad pe ei doi :)Bill&Tom.
Sus
Vezi profilul utilizatorului Trimite mesaj privat

ville_valo
V.I.P
V.I.P


Data inscrierii: 03/Noi/2006
Mesaje: 419

MesajTrimis: 09/11/2006 10:21    Titlul subiectului: Raspunde cu citat (quote)

nextul va fi cat de curand...
Sus
Vezi profilul utilizatorului Trimite mesaj privat

juli@_in_love_wiv_th
Rette mich
Rette mich
juli@_in_love_wiv_th

Data inscrierii: 30/Oct/2006
Mesaje: 156

MesajTrimis: 09/11/2006 18:38    Titlul subiectului: Raspunde cu citat (quote)

oaoo.....incredibil am :'-( :'-( :'-( :'-( :'-( :'-( :'-( :'-( :'-( :'-( :'-( :'-( :'-( :'-( :'-( :'-( :'-( mult mult
Sus
Vezi profilul utilizatorului Trimite mesaj privat Trimite un mesaj

Alinutza
Administrator
Administrator


Data inscrierii: 29/Oct/2006
Mesaje: 490

MesajTrimis: 09/11/2006 18:43    Titlul subiectului: Raspunde cu citat (quote)

ce imi place pov ta...e minunata... :weep:
_________________
This fortress of tears...
Ne cerem scuze pentru Inactivitate.
Sus
Vezi profilul utilizatorului Trimite mesaj privat

just_me
Rette mich
Rette mich
just_me

Data inscrierii: 30/Oct/2006
Mesaje: 215

MesajTrimis: 09/11/2006 19:43    Titlul subiectului: Raspunde cu citat (quote)

ce pot ador fic-ul asta!e super misto!
si acum vin in romania :w00t: ...ce tare!la castelul dracula...si io vreau sa ma duc acolo!am citit cartea,unde de fapt castelul lui dracula nu era castelul bran,dar sunt super curioasa...ma rog,ca sa nu deviez de la subiect...abia astept sa vad ce se va intampla la castel...
ce bine ar fi sa vina in romania cu adevarat :weep:
Sus
Vezi profilul utilizatorului Trimite mesaj privat

ville_valo
V.I.P
V.I.P


Data inscrierii: 03/Noi/2006
Mesaje: 419

MesajTrimis: 09/11/2006 20:50    Titlul subiectului: Raspunde cu citat (quote)

After they made their luggage they changed their clothes. It was 4 pm.
M: Bill.. I go to change my clothes.
B: Go, sweetheart. I’ll go after you.
When Melanie entered the bathroom Bill put on his negru jeans and a black tshirt with a red skull on it.
On the bathroom…
M: What is happening?... said her when she was taking off her tshirt.
She saw the mirror getting dark, and as they were on her beck she saw two bright eyes stearing at her.
M: Noooo!! She screamed.
Bill immediately ran to the bathroom and entered.
B: Melanie, love, what happened? Said him scared.
M: Oh my god… Bill…… what’s this?? What’s this?? Bill…
She was shaking Bill and holding him . She was really scared.
B: Melly… but what are you talking about?....
She was crying desperately, burying her fece in his chest.
M: No.. noo.. I’m just too tired.. noo.. Bill take me out of here.. please Bill…
Bill took Melanie out from the bathroom and sat down with her in the bed.
B: love.. what happened? What have you seen?... tell me…
Melanie thought again and realized that those eyes were actually .. HER eyes… but they were so bright….
M: I don’t know what is happening with me… I’m crazy…
B:No.,sweetheart Calm down and tell me.. please!
He was holding her hand in his hand.
M: I saw the mirror getting dark… and then I saw two bright eyes… but those eyes were my eyes… Oh, no.. I’m too tired Bill…
B: My sweet princess… yes…. You’re tired. I know. I’ll take care about you, love. I’m with you. It happened to me too… is because of the stress, said Bill caressing and embracing her.Change your clothes here.. I’ll go to the bathroom.
After that, Melanie and Bill done their make-up
B: let’s go with the guys, sweety. It’s 7 pm and we need to be at the airport at 9 pm.
Bill took Melanie softly from the waist and went to his brother.
B: Hallo! We’re ready…
T: we’re ready too. Let’s go. ..oh… Melanie.. you look pale… are you ok?
M: Yes, I’m ok, Tom. Thanks.. I’m ok…
Bill looked at Tom. Tom understood that something happened and he didn’t insist anymore.
At the airport. ..
They were waiting to enter the plain.
B: I need to go to the bathroom.. Tom.. take care of Melanie.. please..
T: Of course , Bill. Go.
Melanie was trembling and she was feeling a bit ashamed for what happened on the hotel with Bill. And she was worried too. “Those eyes…” she was thinking…
T:Melanie.. you’re trembling….
M: Don’t worry.. I’m fine., Tom.
Tom touched her hand and realized that she was freezing. He took off his anorack and put it on her.
T: oh my god, Melanie.. are you ok?
M: yes.. don’t worry.. It’s cold in here… that’s all.Thank you Tom.
Bill was coming.
B: Love.. are you ok?What happened.
T: I don’t know, Bill.. she was trembling and she was freezing.
Bill looked worried at tom.
T: Let her with the anorack, Bill. I don’t need it.
Bill held her tight in his arms.
At the middle of the night they were in Romania, at Bran Castle.
The manager: Upstairs are the rooms. Each one could stay in his own room.If you want , of course.
B: I’ll stay with her…
Bill and Melanie went upstairs to their room. It was very dark. The light was from the candles, and in the middle of the roo was the bed and there was a big opened window.
M: It’s so dark and beautiful in here.. Bill..
B:Yes.. it’s amazing sweetheart…
M: Bill.. I don’t want o sleep this night… Iwould like to stay and talk with you.. maybe singing…
They changed their clothes.
Sus
Vezi profilul utilizatorului Trimite mesaj privat

just_me
Rette mich
Rette mich
just_me

Data inscrierii: 30/Oct/2006
Mesaje: 215

MesajTrimis: 09/11/2006 21:51    Titlul subiectului: Raspunde cu citat (quote)

ti-am mai zis ca iti ador fic-ul?
imi place extra mult cum descrii tot felul de chestii...ma intreb si io care era faza cu ochii aia 2 :-/ ...so,nu-ti mai zic ca astept cu nerabdare next-ul...k stii deja...
Sus
Vezi profilul utilizatorului Trimite mesaj privat

ville_valo
V.I.P
V.I.P


Data inscrierii: 03/Noi/2006
Mesaje: 419

MesajTrimis: 09/11/2006 23:20    Titlul subiectului: Raspunde cu citat (quote)

very soon Smile. sa citeasca si celelalte fete:). si pun Smile.
Sus
Vezi profilul utilizatorului Trimite mesaj privat

ville_valo
V.I.P
V.I.P


Data inscrierii: 03/Noi/2006
Mesaje: 419

MesajTrimis: 10/11/2006 19:27    Titlul subiectului: Raspunde cu citat (quote)

Melanie was wearing a long negru dress , tighted on her waist. She was looking gorgeous… like a she-devil. Bil was wearing a black tail coat and ablack hat.. like Dracula. Their make up ws black and heavy..They went out. The yard was gloomy and large. Melanie took Bill from the hand and they went on a large part of the garden.. where the moon light was lighting them. She started to sing…. She was singind “Dangerous mind” by Within Temptation..
M: I'm searching for answers ‘cause something is not right…I follow the signs, I'm close to the fire…… she was singind beautiful, looking straight in his eyes.
Bill was looking completely hypnotized in her eyes….
M: It's in your eyes, what's on your mind…I fear your smile and the promise inside….It's in your eyes, what's on your mind. …I fear your presence, I'm frozen inside…… inside…., Said her whispering… and kept singing…. It's in your eyes, what's on your mind…I see the truth that you've buried inside…It's in your eyes, what's on your mind… there is no mercy, just anger I find…..!!
She was singing beautiful…. With a gorgeous voice… like a she –devil. The wind was blowing her heir… and that was making her even more beautiful and dark.. she was amazing. Bill was looking at her… without saying nothing…. He couldn’t say anymore… Bill.. Bill was singing at electric guitar.. It was Tom’s black guitar. Bill was singing as well as Tom… he was looking gorgeous like that… All dressed in black and with the guitar in his arms….The wind was blowing his beautiful black hair… Melanie was getting closer to him and then she was moving away….
After Melanie’s song … Bill was looking at her…
B: My love.. you’re so… so beautiful.. with… your gorgeous voice… awesome…. You don’t have the idea how did you make me feel…my princess…
M: You played the guitar…. You played so beautiful , Bill…. I didn’t know that you ‘re playing the guitar…
B: Tom tought me…said him smilling. But I don’t play as well as he does.
M: You’re playing very well.. Billl… beautiful… said her embracing him
B: Come, sweetheart.. come with me..
M: Where , Bill?
They were wlking , holding eachother’s hands. Bill was wearing now his black coat, without his hat anymore… Melanie was looking gorgeous in her long black dress.. they walked all the night through the garden, wich was as cold and gloomy like a cemetery.. After they walked they went to their room, and fell asleep holding eachother.
In the morning Melanie woke up, and didn’t rose u from the bed.Bill awas still sleeping. She turned to watch him. He was so sweet..Even without his make–up he was looking gorgeous.She caressed his check. She put her head on his chest and laid down her hand ontop his belly.He ws so thin and delicate… She was feeling his breath. After a few minutes Bill opened his eyes stretching his legs.
B: oh… said him yawning, good morning, love.. said him smilling and gave her a kiss.
Melanie rose her head from his chest . God, he was so sweet… like an angel…
M: Good morning, sweetheart…
They dressed up and went down in the living room to join Tom, Gustav and Georg at the breakfast.
After they ate, Melanie went upstairs because it was a bit cold.
M: I go to take my coat… I’m a bit cold. Be right back, Bill.
B: Sure, go, Melly.
Bill was standing in the living-room only with Tom Georg and Gustav.
T: Bill..?
B: yes
T: I don’t know how to say.. well.. you know..
B: What, Tom? Said him a bit laughing.
Tom was laughing too.
T: Well… Have you done something else with Melanie after this time that you slept together..? said Tom smilling with all his teeths.
Ge: I wanted to ask you that too… but…, said Georg snilling
Bill didn’t know what to say.
B: well… hmm… We only slept together Oh my god… you know that I’m not that type of guy. I don’t know… when I see her… and how beautiful she is… I’m afraid.
Ge: Afraid of what, guy?
B: I .. I don’t know
G: Let him alone, guys! He’s not ready. Let him alone, what the f**k??
Bill looked at gustav and his eyes were saying” thank you! Finally someone understood me!”
T: Yes. Sorry, Bill. I was only curious… Stay calm Bill. Ohh… Tonight we have concert! At 9 pm.
B: melly, come here love. Look, tonight we’ll have a concert. Please.. won’t you come with me? Asked Bill looking at her with his gorgeous big eyes.
M: Of course I’ll go, Bill! Said her smilling.
_________________
" I know who you really
are..you're the one who cries when
you're alone..". I'm here for you & I love you Ville
[URL=http://imageshack.us]This fortress of tears...[/URL]
Sus
Vezi profilul utilizatorului Trimite mesaj privat

andreeabranzan
Vizitator





MesajTrimis: 10/11/2006 22:49    Titlul subiectului: Raspunde cu citat (quote)

vai scz k nu am mai rasp dar nu prea am intrat in ultimele 2 zile...vai dar am citit aku tot, e super fain, cand pui next??? :-D
Sus

ville_valo
V.I.P
V.I.P


Data inscrierii: 03/Noi/2006
Mesaje: 419

MesajTrimis: 11/11/2006 10:58    Titlul subiectului: Raspunde cu citat (quote)

That night, at the concert, Bill sang almost all their songs.he started with” Wenn nicht mehr gejt”, and when he sang “rette mich” the public eas screaming and calling him.
B: VIELEN DANK!!!! DANKE SCHON!!!!!
When he came down from the stage, he went to the backstage. His hair was completely wet, and he was looking completely exausted. When Melanie saw Bill coming she jumped on his arms, embracing him. She was crying and laughing at the sam e time.
M: Bill… oh my god.. Bill.., said her kissing him and embracing him. It was so beautiful… You sang Gorgeous!!
B: danke schon, princess. Oh my god…
They went to hotel
T:see you tomorrow, guys.. I’ll go to sleep ‘cause I’m tired…
B: see you tomorrow. He put his hand behind Melanie waist and went to their room too.
B: Oh, my god… I’m so tired…. Sweetheart, don’t change your clothes….come here with me.. I won’t change my clothes either… I’’l sleep in my jeans ‘cause I don’t have the strength to take them off.I’m too tired. Come with me princess.
Melanie was smilling and looking at Bill. She saw Bill without his Tshirt many times but she was still looking at him, at his arms so fragile, and his shoulders, and his thiny waist. She was looking at each part of his body. Bill went and laid down on the bed. Melanie went beside Bill, and he embraced her holding her close to him. Bil fell asleep quickly.Melanie stood all the night watching him sleeping. He was sleeping like a baby.. like an angel… After a couple of ours Melanie went to the bathroom, to drink some water. She was walking through the room, and after she sat by the window watching the skyand the moon thinking…. She loocked at Bill. He was sleeping so sweet .. he was so innocent…He was holding the pillow in his arms. She went and sat down on her knees in front of the bed. She caressed his white check and his hair. Quickly Bill moved a bit. He wasn;t holding the pillow anymore and his hands were laying by his body. Melanie laid on the bed beside Bill, putting her head on his chest. His scent was fresh and a bit bittersweet. Her head was laying on his chest and her hand on his thiny belly.
On the morning, Melanie woke up first. It was 10 am. It ws a bit late because they have to pack their luggage.
M: Bill….. sweetheart… said her whispering and caressing him. Bill…
Bill moved himself and opened his eyes. He saw Melanie and smiled.
B: Oh.. good morning love… said him yawning and streatching his legs.
M: Hello, sweetheart… it’s 10 am… and we have to do our luggage.We’re leaving in the evening….
B: Oh my god, you’re right! I’ll go to the bathroom.
M: Ok, Bill.
While Bill was taking a shower, Melanie was searching from some Tshirt to put on. Bill came out from the bathroom after hewashed his face , holding his hair tightened in a tail. He wanted to eyeliner his eyes.
M: Oh, my god, Bill… said her still searching for a tshirt
B:What, sweetheart?M: I can’t find any Tshirt to put on me. I was to tired to wash some of those.. oh my god…
B: Look.. take one of my Tshirts, Melly I have small Tshirts, you know.said him smilling. I’ll wear this negru one… this.
M: Oh… danke schon, sweety, saidher smilling. I’ll take this one… with the red skull. I really love it...
B: take it, sweety. Said him smilling and kissing her on her forehead.
B: Now, I’ll go to do my make-up, and to change my clothes.
After an hour Bill and Melanie were ready. Bill was wearing his black Tshirt, his black jeans and his black beautiful rockish boots. He put on his coat too because it was a bit cold.
B: You look … god.. you’re so beautiful….
M: I love this Tshirt.. I love it, Bill. Said her smilling.
She was looking beautiful in his Tshirt, with her beautiful hair falling on her shoulders. She was wearing her black pants. She was special. They went to met the others. Ther were going to Finland again, because they were invited to participate at a special event of the rock music.
At 3 am., in the morning, they were t the Finnish airport. They had accommodation at an old and beautiful house. It was looking very strange and all inside was gloomy. Bill and Melanie went as always together at the same room, and the guys at their rooms.
B: Oh my god.. I’m so tired… said him when he entered the room.
He took off his coat and he lighted one cigarette while he was laying upon the wall. He was looking so beautiful and dark smoking that cigarette… Melanie went close to Bill and kissed him. He passed his hand through her beautiful hair. As ther were close to the window, he threw the cigarette over the window.
M: Do you believe in me?..
B: I believe in you, and I love you. I give everything just to be with you all my life, princess…
He took her in his arms and embraced her tight . She was feeling safe in his arms. He was so tall and she was feeling as he was a part of her. He kissed her…. And she kissed him too. He took off her Tshirt efter he took off his Tshirt….
In the morning she woke up and as she was rising her head she realized that her head was laying on his chest. She stood a couple of minutes thinking and watching Bill. “He’s the man of my life..” she was saying in her mind while she was caressing his chest. His skin was so sensitive.. he was sensitive with all his being. As she was caressing his chest and his belly, he opened his eyes…
B: .. hallo, sweetheart…. Said him smilling
M: Hallo, Bill. Said her laying her head upon his chest.
After a few seconds Bill realized what had happened last night.
B: I love you, sweetheart… said him caressing her hair
Melanie rose her head softly and looked at Bill
M: I was so afraid that you….
B: .. but afraid of what, princess?asked him looking sweet at her
Melanie rose her head and and laid beside Bill, looking at the ceiling.
B: Do you have the idea of how happy I am, Melly? Said hi caressing carefully her belly. I’m the most happy man because I found you, princess. I don’t need anything.. With you I’m Bill. Just simply Bill.
M: I love you because you’re a special man, Bill.. Not because you’re Bill from the rock band Tokio Hotel, you know?
B: I know it baby.. I know because I feel it. I want to stay with you all my time….
They were laying on the bed. He was wearing only short pants and Melanie was wearing short pants too and and when she was putting on Bill’s Tshirt, Tom and the guys were knocking at the door, and they entered because it was 11.am and he thought that Bill and Melanie were ready too.
T: Hallo!.... ups… f**k! Sorry! Said him and turn and got out of the room. He was laughing but a bit ashamed.
T: Georg, Gustav… have you seen ??? asked him completely confused
Ge, G:: Yes, we saw. Said them smilling
T:Oh my god... let’s go because my brother will going to kill me now..... let’s go....
_________________
" I know who you really
are..you're the one who cries when
you're alone..". I'm here for you & I love you Ville
[URL=http://imageshack.us]This fortress of tears...[/URL]
Sus
Vezi profilul utilizatorului Trimite mesaj privat

just_me
Rette mich
Rette mich
just_me

Data inscrierii: 30/Oct/2006
Mesaje: 215

MesajTrimis: 11/11/2006 13:32    Titlul subiectului: Raspunde cu citat (quote)

ha,ha,ha...i-au prins inflagrant delict...
tare!ma rog,chiar ma intrebam cand aveau de gand sa o faca :innocent: ...ca erau prea cuminti...
in penultima parte bill a fost asa de cute cand a zis k el nu e genul ala de tip :innocent: ...
Sus
Vezi profilul utilizatorului Trimite mesaj privat
Afiseaza mesajele pentru a le previzualiza:   
Creaza un subiect nou   Acest subiect este inchis, nu se pot crea sau raspunde la mesaje    Pagina de start a forumului ToKiO-HoT3L-4Ev3R-RoCkS.MyForum.ro : ..:Fan Fiction:.. Ora este GMT + 3 ore
Du-te la pagina 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6
Pagina 2 din 6

 
Mergi direct la:  
Nu puteti crea un subiect nou in acest forum
Nu puteti raspunde in subiectele acestui forum
Nu puteti modifica mesajele proprii din acest forum
Nu puteti sterge mesajele proprii din acest forum
Nu puteti vota in chestionarele din acest forum