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MesajTrimis: 14/11/2006 22:44    Titlul subiectului: Raspunde cu citat (quote)

pareri fetele.. pareri :yes: :-P :please: :please: :please:
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MesajTrimis: 14/11/2006 23:18    Titlul subiectului: Raspunde cu citat (quote)

lipsesc si io o zi jumate si atatea chestii se intampla intre timp :w00t: ...saraca fata !saracu bill!ce sweet e cand se gandeste ca e vina lui!si,ink o chestie,cred ca ti-am mai zis,atata imi place cand incepi sa descrii relatia intre bill&tom...is asa de draguti ca tin asa de mult unul la altul :-)
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:'-( :'-( :'-( :'-( :'-( :'-( :'-( :'-( :'-( :'-( :'-( :'-( :'-( :'-( :'-( :'-( :'-( :'-( :'-( :'-( :'-(
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MesajTrimis: 14/11/2006 23:46    Titlul subiectului: Raspunde cu citat (quote)

da stiu ... si mie imi place la nebunie sa descriu relatia dintre ei doi.. mi s epare att de dulce.. stiu.. stiu exact la ce te referi... :-)
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M: No .. no! I was dreaming of something.. god.. no…
She was so scared…
M: No.. I dreamt with that man.. that man who.. who entered my room and…
B: Don’t think at that fucking man anymore, Melly..
M: No, Bill! Don’t you undertand me? She said crying. I’m afraid of this dream not to become true..
B: Melly.. don’t.. don’t hurt you anymore…
M: Bill.. Said her looking straingh into his eye. In my dream that man was on this room. I was tied on an armchair and..
She was telling all her dream looking straight almost to nowhere..
M: And you was there.. on the bed. And he took you and drag you up from your hair, in front of me… and you screamed in pain while he was dragging you up...
Melanie was crying quietly.
B: Stop it Melly.. don’t hurt you anymore… I can’t stand to see you like this… no..
M No, Bill.. please… I need to tell you… And.. and that man took you and you was so helpless… he started to.. kiss you against your will, .. It was horrible! And…
Bill was looking at scared at her. She was looking desperate.
M: Oh my god, Bill.. I was feeling like I was dying! That man told me that I don’t know what is suffering and that he will show me what suffer means.
Bill caressed her check looking at her.. Melanie put her hand on his check, caressing him.
M; and… you was crying so helpless… He wanted to rape you. Oh my god, Bill.. I’m so afraid! That man is following us everywhere! I can’t stand it anymore…
She was crying strongly.
B: Sweetheart.. it was just a dream… said him taking her into his arms. Just a dream…
M : I don’t want this dream to become true, Bill!
B: No.. sweetheart… please try to calm down… It won't become true..
Bill turned the light off and they laid down on the bed. Melanie was laying on her back and Bill on his left side caressing her. After a while Melanie fell asleep.
B: “she’s so beautiful and sweet…" said Bill to himself.
She was wearing short black pants and a bra an he was wearing only his black pants.. He get closer to her and put his head on her chest with his right hand on her thiny belly. After a couple of hours Melanie woke up and saw that it was 5 am. She looked at Bill who was laying his head on her chest holding her waist. He was looking like an angel sleeping. Melanie put her hand on his back and felt his skin cold. She covered him with the blancket and held him in her arms, and kissed him on his forehead.
M: “ My sweetheart…” she whispered.
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MesajTrimis: 15/11/2006 16:53    Titlul subiectului: Raspunde cu citat (quote)

vreau sa av zik k akm pov va lua o tenta trista... :weep: :'-( sad.. se vor intampla att de multe ca nici nu va imaginatzi.... sincer... serios vb.. Iar la sf, dupa ce veti termina de citit toata pov sa-mi spuneti dak ar merita sa fac si continuarea...
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MesajTrimis: 15/11/2006 19:29    Titlul subiectului: Raspunde cu citat (quote)

moama...da chiar e mijto....imi pare atat de rau pt ei.... :'-(
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MesajTrimis: 15/11/2006 20:25    Titlul subiectului: Raspunde cu citat (quote)

curand nextul..asta dak sunteti curioase... :-(
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MesajTrimis: 15/11/2006 20:28    Titlul subiectului: Raspunde cu citat (quote)

da deci e extra tare, ai f mult talent!!1 bv tie!! imi place k e in engleza asa mai exersez so io k is l limbi straine, da nu cont...deci vreau multt next k e mega fain!!! ink o data bv bv bv bv!!!! :smile:
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MesajTrimis: 15/11/2006 20:55    Titlul subiectului: Raspunde cu citat (quote)

nextul.. si akm intervine u personaj nou...


In the morning Melanie woke up first. She looked at Bill. He was still laying on her chest. She caressed him softly. He was looking like an angel. So innocent and beautiful. While she was caressing him, he woke up and opened his eyes streatching his legs.
B: mm… hello sweetheart… said him smilling sweet, then kissing her belly.
M; Hello, Bill… oh you’re so sweet when you wake up, said her laughing softly. So sweet…
B: oh, no1 I look awfull! No.. said him laughing.
M: No.. your so swet! Smiled her.
B: I love you, my angel.. said him kissing her.
M: I love you too.
B: I’ll go to take a shower..
M: Go, Bill.
It passed a month, and Melanie was trying hard to surpass tha fact that she was raped. Bill was trying as much as he could to make her feel better.
T: Bill.. I wanted to ask you something…
B: yes, what?
T: Bill.. Melanie surrpased what happened to her that night?
B: No.. I mean she’s a bit more calm now… but she still have nightmares.. actually.. the same nightmare each night.
T: Since that night? The same nightmare?
B: Yes.. and.. I’m completely compasioned when I see her waking completely perspired, screaming… almost evey nigh…
T: God… but tell me wich is her nightmare? About what ?
B: About that man… who raped her.
Georg and Gustav were there too listen to Bill.
T: about that man?? She’s dreaming about what happened to her, or what?
B: No.. actually.. she’s dreaming about me and her. In her dream we’re in our room and that man too. She’s tied on an armchair and that man is saying to her that she didn’t know what is suffering and that he’ll show to her what iis. And as the story goes, that man took me in front of her, against the wall and strted to kiss me, to unzip my jeans.. well.. god.. he wants to rape me… And she’s dreaming of this every night.. Really , Tom… she’s so fragile… she’s suffering a lot… I can’t believe what that man have done to her… Why?? Why he done this to her?
T: Oh my god, Bill.. really… poor girl…
B: And she said to me that she’s afraid of this dream not to become true. I don’t know why is she thinking at this.. But she’s so afraid, guys..
G: I understand.. god…
While they were talking, someone knocked at the door and Bill went to see who was. It was Mark, the best friend of him and his brother but he was also good friend with Georg and Gustav too.
B: Oh, hallo Mark! Said Bill laughing very happy and gave him an embrace.
Ma: Hallo, guys!
T: Mark!! How are you guy?
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MesajTrimis: 15/11/2006 21:03    Titlul subiectului: Raspunde cu citat (quote)

mmm, un nou pers!! misto... deci knd pui nextul??? k is curioasa!!
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MesajTrimis: 15/11/2006 21:39    Titlul subiectului: Raspunde cu citat (quote)

mai,e mega tare povestea...si dak zici,tu k mai vin multe chestii misto si interesante atunci :mbounce: ...
si un nou personaj :-) ...well,that's cool!adik o sa devina si mai complexa chestia...
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MesajTrimis: 15/11/2006 23:13    Titlul subiectului: Raspunde cu citat (quote)

Mark... va fi un personaj destul de important... vetzi vedea.. :-|
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MesajTrimis: 16/11/2006 15:25    Titlul subiectului: Raspunde cu citat (quote)

pai daaaa, abia aspeptam sa vedem!!! :w00t:
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MesajTrimis: 16/11/2006 15:29    Titlul subiectului: Raspunde cu citat (quote)

so... dupa asta va veni cva... in fine veti vedea....


Mark was looking tired and his eyes were a bit different like they were before.
B: Come in! So.. How are you? It’s been an year since we saw you last time.
Ma: Well… I don’t know… mothing had happened… nothing special.
T: You look very tired… I don’t know…
Ma: No. I’m fine.
B: Mark.. have you continue taking drugs?
Ma: A bit… you know
B: Why, Mark? You’re in a band… your band needs you..You are a great rock band you know? And we need you too..
Ma: Yes, I know… I swear that I’m seldom taking drugs. Rarely. Only when we are celebrating our success after a concert.
B: Mark… we love you.. you’re our best friend.. we’re worried for you, guy.
Ma: I know, guys. Stay calm. Trust me. Really. This is happening a few times. We celebrated last week our success for our new album. And that’s it.
He was saying the truth.he wasn’t an addicted. Just a bit rebel.
B: Ok, Mark.. So. . where did you stay now?
Ma: Well, I stay at my house now. For 2 weeks.
B: Freat! I’ll visit you. We’ll visit you, actually.
Ma: Of course, said him laughing. I’m alone. I ike it. My parents wanted to move but I decided to keep in my old house.
B: That’s good, really. We’re staying here, only us, and my girlfriend, Melanie.
Ma: Oh, do you have a girlfriend?
B: Yes.. She’s my sweetheart..
Ma: Oh, Bill!I’m very happy for you, guy! Said him embracing Bill.
After 1 week…
T: Bill, come we’re going to that new club. Take Melanie and let’s go.
B: Oh, no..Tom.. I’m too tired…. I stay here. Melanie it’s tired too and she went to sleep. And I’m not in the mood to go to the club. Go, guys! But not me…
T: Are you sure? Me and the guys we’re going….
B: Enjoy it, really. I stay at home. Or maybe I’ll go to talk with Mark for a while. I don’t know…
T: Ok.. well… If you want to stay here… Ah, and if you’ll go to Mark, greet him for us too! Bye1
B: Sure.Bye guys!
Tom , Gustav and Greorg went out. Melanie was sleeping and Bill thought to visit Mark for a couple of hours. He put on his coat and went out. He was wearing his negru Tshirt and his black jeans.
Ma: Wait a moment! He said when Bill knocked at his door.
Mark’s voice was law. He went to open the door. He was a bit dizzy because he had taken drugs again.
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MesajTrimis: 16/11/2006 17:59    Titlul subiectului: Raspunde cu citat (quote)

si sa va vad reactia dupa ce veti citi nextul..adik dupa bucată asta pe care am pus-o akm.. vreau sa vad pareri..dak vi s-a parut bine ca am scris sau dak nu... :unsure: dak am scris bine..dak nu... orikm fetele.. vreau commenturi,...pareri :-D :-|
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MesajTrimis: 16/11/2006 18:40    Titlul subiectului: Raspunde cu citat (quote)

pai mie mi se pare f cool ficu' si ast nextu', mai da' baiatu' ala nu se poate lasa d droguri?? moama nasol.. :-/
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MesajTrimis: 16/11/2006 18:52    Titlul subiectului: Raspunde cu citat (quote)

mmm.. practic el ia droguri..insa nu este un dpendent din ala care nu se poate lasa.. ia ocazional... insa.... :unsure: vetzi vedea in urmatoarea parte... cva...
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MesajTrimis: 16/11/2006 18:54    Titlul subiectului: Raspunde cu citat (quote)

pai si knd e nextul??? :smile:
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MesajTrimis: 16/11/2006 19:05    Titlul subiectului: Raspunde cu citat (quote)

ok... aici avetzi next-ul... so...enjoy it.. sper..


B: Hallo!
Ma: Hallo, Bill.. come in..
B: Tom and the guys went out at one club, Melanie is sleeping and ‘cause I’m nott in the moos to go with the guys.. I thought to visit you. Am I interrumping you?
Ma: No, no, Bill. I’m glad you’re here. Come. Let’s go in my room because here is such a mess….
They went in Mark’s room. They sat down on the edge of the bed, watching on Tv a PLACEBO concert. After a couple of hours Mark turned off the TV because the concert was over.
B: It was great! God, I love PLACEBO! So.. Mark.. when did you start the tour?
Ma: In a week but I’m so tired of this…
Bill was as Mark on the edge of the bed, laying now on his back to streatch himself.
B: Oh my god…. I’m so tired… I think I’m going home now.. Melanie is alone.. and… Said him laying on the bed.
Mark put his hand an Bill’s leg but not just for beating him like a friend, as he was doing always. Mike touched Bill’s tigh. Bill rose up standing on the edge of the bed, looking at Mark completely puzzled.
B: W.. what are you doing, Mark?.. said him as he didn’t know mark anymore.
Mark was drugged. He didn’t take drugas singe a lot of time, but that night he was drugged and also a bit drunk. Bill was puzzled and started to move away from Mark, but Mark took him from the hand and put him on the bed, holding Bill’s wrists with a hand. Now Bill started to be afraid. His eye were stearing straight at Mark.
B: Mark…. No… what are yu doing?
Ma: Shh… I know what you need to not feel tired anymore.
B: No!
Mark was holding Bill’s wrists with a hand and with the other hand struggling,pushed down Bill’s jeans.
B: No! Mark! Please! Don’t do this! No!
Bill was screaming so loud that the neighbours coul came. But they were out for vacation, so no one could hear his screams. Mark kissed Bill violently. Now Bill was completely scared. Mark was looking weird.
B: Mark.. please… don’t do this to me… no Mark! But now he was whispering.
Ma: No, Bill. You said that you was tired. I know how to make you feel better. Trust me, Bill.
And Mark took Bill and pushed him into a kiss again. Bill was struggling hard.
B: NO! BUT I DON’T FEEL GOOD! You scare me, mark! No!
Mark took, from the bedside table a scarf(on his bedside table always was staying a scarf), and tied Bill from his wrists above on the head of the bed.
Ma: Don’t worry. You’ll like it…
Now Bill was completely terrified.
B: Mark, no, please!... untie me.. please!! You don’t know what are you..
But mark interrumped him
Ma: But I know what you like… said him kissing Bill again. Shh…
Bill was trying desperately to untie himself but he couldn’t. Mark pushed wholly down Bill’s jeans and he was staying in between Bill’s legs.
B: No! Mark, don’t! Please! Don’t!
Now his voice wasn’t his voice. It was a voice pf a baby, completely scared and helpless. He was crying desperately and his tears were black because of the black eyeliner.. When Mark kissed Bill again he felt a salt taste. It was because of Bill’s tears wich were falling on his cheecks without stopping.
B: Please… Mark… don’t do it.. please… don’t do this to me… Mark!
He was crying desperately. He was completely helpless.
Ma; I won’t stop… I;m gonna take you high…
B: NO! No! Stop it! Please!! He was crying and triying to avoid Mark.. He was trembling really hard.
Suddenly mark stopped and looked at Bill as he realized what he was doing.
Ma: What is happening?! Said him closing his eyes as he was starting to think clear.
Bill was a bit more calm now.
RThen Mark looked at Bill, who was laying in front of him, with his hands tied and his jeans pushed down. Mark touched again Bill’s belly as he didn’t know Bill.
B: No… no.. please…,begged Bill still crying and shivering.
Then Mark untied Bill and went down from the bed. Bill put on his jeans and went to Mark.
Ma: No.. no.. what have I done?? Said him putting his hands on his forehead.. he was desperate.
B: It wasn’t you… said him but almost to himself.
Ma: What? Asked him because he didn’t hear .
B: It wasn’t you, Mark. It was only because of the drugs.
Ma: Oh my god… If I would done you something I wouldn’t forgive me ever! Said him crying desperately.
B: Mark.. stop it.. no.. it wasn’t you! The drugs made you like this!So. Let me help you…
Ma: Bill, you’re my best friend.. please forgive me….. please… Said him crying.
B: Mark.. stop it….
Mark went and embraced Bill tight. Bill wasn’t afraid anymore. Now HE was his friend now and not before.Bill wrapped his hands around Mark’s back and embraced him tight. Mark was a beautiful guy, with black long hair and green eyes. He was as tall as Bill.
B: I’ll help you, Mark. Trust me. I’ll help you..
Ma: Thanl you, Bill.Now mark was rspeaking more and more normal. The effect of the drugs was disminuating. Was passing.Ma: But I swear that I didn’t take drugs for a really long time.. I don’t know what had happened to me now…
B: Mark, please.. now go to sleep, ok? You need to rest. I ‘ll think on what you should do.. I’ll be with you . You know this. Bow.. go to sleep. Bye… see you tomorrow, ok? Said him beating Mark softly on his check.
Ma: Thank you, Bill.
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MesajTrimis: 16/11/2006 19:08    Titlul subiectului: Raspunde cu citat (quote)

sorry pt greseli..kiar am scris repede/.... :-|
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MesajTrimis: 16/11/2006 19:17    Titlul subiectului: Raspunde cu citat (quote)

nui nik, calm down!! moama da' bietu' bill, e a 3 oara knd trece prin asta!!! :lol:
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MesajTrimis: 16/11/2006 22:22    Titlul subiectului: Raspunde cu citat (quote)

dap.... :'-( :'-(
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MesajTrimis: 17/11/2006 09:18    Titlul subiectului: Raspunde cu citat (quote)

da saracu',...nush ce as face dak m-as afla in situatia lui...... :weep:
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MesajTrimis: 17/11/2006 16:46    Titlul subiectului: Raspunde cu citat (quote)

ink va place fetele? :-( :'-(
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MesajTrimis: 17/11/2006 16:48    Titlul subiectului: Raspunde cu citat (quote)

e chiar ciudat de cate ori i se intampla asta la bill,saracu de el :-( ...ca sa vezi ce face drogul din om....whatever,is cam prea somnoroasa sa las un comentariu mai de doamne ajuta,dar nah...
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MesajTrimis: 17/11/2006 16:54    Titlul subiectului: Raspunde cu citat (quote)

logik k ne place!!! :lol: knd ne pui nextu'??? :-D
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MesajTrimis: 17/11/2006 17:09    Titlul subiectului: Raspunde cu citat (quote)

mm..pai akm il pun Smile :-D vroiam sa vad parerile voastre... deci v-a placut ? merita sa mai continui...?:unsure: :whistle:
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MesajTrimis: 17/11/2006 19:41    Titlul subiectului: Raspunde cu citat (quote)

da mei.... :lol: :lol: :lol:
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MesajTrimis: 17/11/2006 20:50    Titlul subiectului: Raspunde cu citat (quote)

ok:) :-D aici avetzi next-ul....

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When Bill went out, it was 1. am. While he was walking home, he noticed that he had scratches on his belly, because when Mark tied him, he scratched him on his belly. He had scratches also on his left arm.
Ariving home…..
B: Hallo.
T: Hallo. .. What? (realized him). What are you doing an this time outside? And alone?
B: I went to Mark. I went to his house. He’s really feelinh bad.. he took grugs again.. I didn’t know it before I went to his house. I saw it when I was there.
T: what? Oh my god… and how is he? God…
B: Bad… I don’t know…bad.. said him taking off his coat.
He rose his hand to open the window and his Tshirt uncovered a bit his belly.
T: Bill.. what is that on your belly? Asked him confused and serious.
Ge: And on your left hand…
B: Oh.. nothing. An accident with..
But Tom interrumped him and rose up more Bill’s Tshirt.
T: These are nail scratches. And on your hand… what… what happened to you?? Said him worried
Bill didn’t know what to say, but he thought that Tom had to know what happened because he was his brother, and Georg and Gustav too, because they were his friends.
B: Well… said him with a law voice
T: What , Bill??
B: When I went to Mark, he was already drugged… We talk, watched a PLACEBO concert, and suddenly he turned off the TV, and when I said that I need to go home to see how was Melly, he started to touch my leg…
Tom didn’t say anything. He couldn’t say something. It was too much for him.
B: Well.. I tried to avoid him, but he put me on the bed and after some minutes of struggling, he tied me…
T: He did what?? Asked him with a loud voice. He was angry. Very angry but he was trying to hide it as more as it was possible.
B: He tied me with a scarf, on the head of the bed. Please.. don’t make me tell all the details… It’s too paintfull for me also to tell you what happened without details…. Said Bill with a sad voice. He put me on his bed and pushed down my jeans against my will and was then when when he scratches my belly…
T: No… noo.. Said tom putting his hand on his face.
B: He was acting like that because of the drugs….
T: No.. Bill.. please… don’t tell me that… that he…
B: No. But I was desperate! Really! No one heard me. The neighbours were out for vacation. I was crying and begging Mark not to do that. My body was trembling hard and he suddenly stopped. I don’t know how.. I don’t know why… but he stopped as he realized what he was doing. But I lived a horror night… Really….
Bill was trembling a bit, he was looking exausted.. his eyes were contured with eyeliner but you could observe the drags of his tears. He was looking so fragile… Tom went close to him sitting down on the couch beside him.
T: Oh my god… look what he had done to you…
B: It doesn’t matters…
Tom embraced Bill tight and georg and Gustav went to them too. To support Bill. When Tom embraced Bill, Bill started to cry as he couldn’t pretend anymore … he was desperate and shocked of what happened. He couldn’t pretend anymore. He had live dhorror moments that night and he needed to unload all the fear he felt in those moments.
T: Bill.. I’m here… said him holding him tight.
B: I was so afraid… I don’t know… I couldn’t defend myself! I think that because of the drugs he was stronger than usual.
Then Bill was looking at his wrists, touching them. His thiny wrists were bluished because Mark tied him very tight with that scarf.
T: Oh.. no… Said him touching softly Bill’s wrists. This is paintfull…
B: ouch.. said him in a quiet voice tightening his teeths because of the pain.
Tom looked at him, feeling his soul deserted.
Tom has his hair untied and left down his head in his hands.. Then he rose up his head.. Bill had again that look of scared because telling the whole happening to them and rememebering all again.
T: Bill.. come here… said him opening his arms to embrace Bill and Bill wrapped his arms around Tom. Then Bill laid his head on Tom’s legs.
T: Stay calm now… and don’t think of what had happened anymore.. said him caressing Bill’s hair.
Melanie just woke up and went downstairs. She was at the entrance of the living-room and she heard the last sentence.
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